Reviews for Prehistoric Park: Series 2
Godzilla'99 chapter 6 . 1/28
I still wished that you'd put a Gorgonopsid in this story but it's pretty good nonetheless.
Godzilla'99 chapter 5 . 1/28
Now this is a story you can bet people will love reading. But I don't recall Pteranodons living in the same place & time as Giganotosaurus & Argentinosaurus.
Godzilla'99 chapter 4 . 1/28
Great story. I do wish you'd add more drama & adventure to your stories.
Godzilla'99 chapter 3 . 1/28
Awesome. Perhaps I should add Odobenocetops in one of my next books.
Godzilla'99 chapter 1 . 1/27
Great story. I love the explicit details you've put in this story.

Bit of advice, try adding a few more dinosaurs in your stories, if not, think about adding the mammal-like reptile called Gorgonopsid.
Sailor Barsoom chapter 6 . 7/28/2014
One little nitpick: Quetzalcoatlus didn't have any feathers to ruffle. Birds and dinosaurs have feathers; Q would have had fur. Not mammal hair, but something similar.
Other that that I think you did a fine job. If you write more, I'll read it.
danny chapter 5 . 1/29/2014
are you ever going to continue this? I've read through it multiple times and I've always been curious about how bob would deal with being stuck in the past.
scott chapter 5 . 1/24/2014
I have some ideas for you. Sleeping dragons , giant three toed sloth , New Zealand , cave bear , stagosor
Guest chapter 1 . 1/23/2014
I would really like to see this ! :-)
xXxKaraBeckerCutterxXx chapter 2 . 9/3/2013
I've never actually watched Prehistoric Park, but I have seen the Walking with... series. They're awesome.

Onto chapter 3.
Sailor Barsoom chapter 5 . 5/13/2013
Quite good. Really, this series could've been continued.
LunaNightfang20 chapter 5 . 2/22/2013
dude you gotta keep writing this story its one of my top favs
GracieClaire chapter 5 . 9/4/2012
Great job keep up the good work.
teddybowties chapter 5 . 7/11/2012
..and an unwilling Bob. heheh

also, heard/herd? is that a locale difference or a mispell?

Is it sad or funny that Suzane in this chapter makes me think of the song Suzanne? hhhaaha
teddybowties chapter 4 . 7/11/2012
okay- let me see if my Aztec/Mayan/Olmec/Toltec/Mixtec/Incan, etc is anywhere near right:

Tupuxuara is pronounced TOO-poo-SHWAR-ah, yes?

Haha, I love Bob.

Also, Quetzalcoatlan! Always a hit with the kiddies. And me too! awesome.
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