Reviews for Team Olympus Book 1: The Artifact
HK FrostyMan chapter 5 . 8/15/2013
Well its been a while since this was updated haha. Good luck on your book if it's still going, but I think all of us would like something new to read. Thanks,
-HK
DragonJo64 chapter 5 . 7/11/2012
you've been spelling ISAIAH wrong. IZAYAH is not a word.
Master Noble chapter 4 . 6/1/2012
Nice to see this. How long ago did you start this?

When are you introducing the elites? Not that i want you to rush so i can see my charactar...
mcknight93 chapter 4 . 5/20/2012
Great job on the story, it looks like it is going pretty good.

The Spartans are interesting, and I imagine it will be weird do for them to meet the Odst.

Can't wait to see the Elites.

So great job on the story, I hope to see another update soon.
HK FrostyMan chapter 4 . 5/11/2012
Good job once again. Glad to see you fixed the commas. It makes the story a lot easier to read. Good chapter, and I also liked the prank, and the repercussions were very enjoyable as well, nice job.

-The Tank
3.141529 chapter 4 . 5/9/2012
nice prank
Spry chapter 4 . 5/8/2012
WOOHOO! This meansthe ODST's and Spartans meet up, right? COOL!

Plus, there's a ton of explosions. That should turn out entertaining. XD

Also, loved Ash's semi-failed prank. ;D That was great.

MORE PLEASE!

Spry!
Spry chapter 3 . 4/16/2012
HI AGAIN! Sorry it took me so long to review. :/

Great chapter! Ooh, a secret! Secrets are interesting. XD

Keep up wth the good work! And here, have a cookie. :D

Spry!
3.141529 chapter 3 . 4/13/2012
Good Chapter, but if you need help with puting in comas. Read the story out loud and put one in every where you would normaly take a breath.

Also you forgot Nova's Active Camo!

An admiral as a front line trooper thats odd, usually they are at the back of the army away from all the action.
HK FrostyMan chapter 3 . 4/12/2012
Nice chapter, story is looking good. One thing though, You might want to use a few more commas, because it gets a little tough to read otherwise. But other than that, the story is coming together spectacularly. Nice work,

-The Tank
ODST 262 chapter 2 . 3/27/2012
Hey good chapter, nice way of introducing the ODSTs. Like TheDyingTitan said it's a bit short- but that should mean quicker updates, right?

And give me a look at the book please, I love reading previews.
Spry chapter 2 . 3/27/2012
AWESOME!

Once again, great job and thanks for using Elata. :D

You're an awesome writer, and I wouldn't mind critiquing your story, though I don't know if I'd really be able to help. I have really odd tastes is all. :P

But anyway, you rock!

Spry!
HK FrostyMan chapter 2 . 3/27/2012
Great job again, glad you got to my character. Wrote him very I think. When he got kicked in the head, I thought to myself, "exactly what I pictured him like". Good job.

-The Tank
3.141529 chapter 2 . 3/27/2012
nice chapter but who's point of view is it from?

all around a good chapter, could have been longer but i can trade short chapters for more updates
HK FrostyMan chapter 1 . 3/11/2012
Good start- scratch that, great start. I like the way you've written all of the characters so far (Even though you haven't gotten to mine, haha). But anyways, congrats on starting a great new story.

P.S. My gamertag is NoiseTankR3K, so if you or anyone want to play something with me (i.e. Halo or Mass Effect 3) just let me know.

-The Tank
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