Reviews for Intimate Brotherly Love
kyoneko87 chapter 1 . 6/22/2017
Just a short comment. Oniichan means "big brother". He should call Yukio Outouto, "little brother" instead, unless he has a kink of calling his younger brother "big brother". Also I didn't instance the word you were using to describe them rubbing their members against each other. Otherwise I liked the story.
Maya1109 chapter 1 . 8/21/2014
They are too cute together. Just a few grammatical errors, but otherwise it was pretty good.
MikiYuri chapter 1 . 11/25/2013
Wow. That escalated quickly. O.o Not that it matters. XD
gingerbreadmantelpiece chapter 1 . 4/13/2013
"I constantly dreamed about our bodies becoming one in ecstasy."

A tad too cheesy.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/30/2013
Very cute! XD
alicexthexmadxhatter chapter 1 . 4/29/2012
OH. MY. GOD! I never thought I would see the day! *is huge yaoi fan* omfg, I love this so much! . thanks for writing this!
BakemonoShoujo chapter 1 . 4/17/2012
That was hot! can you make more of this? xD haha thank you i really liked this
AkiraNatsume chapter 1 . 3/31/2012
Azera Bell chapter 1 . 3/11/2012
i love it! ur very talented at writing lemons! and in my opinion this is one of my favorite lemons ever!
Bone-eater chapter 1 . 2/24/2012
*noseblead * ekk so sexy X3