Reviews for No one
HelenHK chapter 1 . 8/2/2002
:_( you're love storeis make me sad, nice job
otterfudge chapter 1 . 5/24/2002
This is short, yes, but very touching and poetic.I love how you expressed Obi-Wan's thoughts in such a truthful and heart-breaking way. I don't think it needed anything more; it should be considered as a singular piece of heartfelt beauty. Wonderful.
review chapter 1 . 5/20/2002
i think that this is very beautiful. very poetic. i like the flow of the thoughts. i, of course, am also a huge fan of sw slash with qui/obi pairings. keep up the good work. looking forward to reading more of your works in the future.
Acacia chapter 1 . 5/20/2002
Well, no one should have to go reviewless..

I *have* seen better.. it's got potential, and I think you can do even better, so I will look for more from you, but it's not perfect.

Not that it wasn't very *good*. I really rather liked it, you do good emotion, it captures the sense of helplessness in that scene quite well. Must be horrible, to have to watch anyone you know so well get slaughtered and not be able to *do* anything. Poor Obi.