|Reviews for Damaged Goods|
| TuesdayNovember chapter 1 . 2/23/2012
Ooh, Ben! You already know I adore this to death, but there's no harm in telling you again. This was really well written. I think you captured the scene very well in poetry. Overall, great job!
| El Chacal chapter 1 . 2/22/2012
This shot at poetry directed to Tellatrix sounds good even if there was no standard rhyming of words. It says a lot with few words. For your first SoA/HP poem, it is pretty good.