Reviews for Goodbyes
Crystal Blue Montana chapter 1 . 2/23/2012
Like the previous reviewer, I do agree that Kegaleshia should have had "ojaru" at the end of most of her sentences, since that's how she talked in canon.

That being said, I quite enjoyed this one-shot. I had actually kind of forgotten that Hanto had developed a bit of an affection for Kegaleshia (or at least for "Rena") during the caper at the hot springs, so this was a nice revisiting of that. I like how you had Hanto be sharp enough to figure out that "Rena" and Kegaleshia were the same person, and that the Gaiark, like the Go-ongers, just wanted a nice place to call home (though their respective definitions of nice were vastly different).

During the time that Go-onger aired, it probably would have been cute and interesting to explore a Hanto/Kegaleshia relationship, but barring that, you've come up with the next best thing in this beautiful bittersweet tale. Kudos!
Izout chapter 1 . 2/22/2012
Not bad. Though, I would've thrown in a few "Ojaru"s since all Gaiark have verbal tics.