|Reviews for Giving Into the Impulse|
| im awesome chapter 1 . 12/29/2013
nice are you going to update i hope you do or even if you start a sequel that would be cool
| awesome chapter 1 . 12/6/2013
Love it...hope you do a sequel!
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/5/2013
do one where they meet in new world with her crew that came from this i honestly wanna see how you do sanjis reaction although nothing can beat his reaction about luffy knowing hancock its not fair lol
| Zander Cage chapter 1 . 8/26/2013
Inside, Naruto and Robin were kissing, touching, and grouping each other, while removing every single piece of outfit they are wearing. When they finally reach the bed, they were completely naked, each radiated with lust.
Pushing Naruto on the bed, Robin begin studying Naruto's body with her lusting gaze. While Naruto wasn't muscular he was well built, his skin tone slightly tanned and fit body glistening with sweat. Not to mention a 12 inch hard on between his leg that cause Robin to unconsciously licked her lips.
Naruto was doing some studying of his as well. Robin's body was exotically beautiful, her physique measure to be slender, athletic, tall, along larger breasts, longest legs, and hourglass core. He was struggling to keep the raging, lusting beast within him from jumping Robin and ravaging her on the spot
"Naruto, do you have any condoms?" she asked him.
"No," he replied. "Don't worry, I go to a nearby..."
"No!" Robin cuts him off as she jump on top of him, where she straddled his hips tightly with her thighs putting pressure on his already hard member, causing him to moan softly. She grab his head to kiss him close, pressing her breasts against his chest. "I can't wait any longer! I got to have you now! Just...just...
"Don't worry," Naruto replied as he kiss her back while squeezing her ass, hugging close to his body. "I won't come inside of you! I promise!
| Esarion chapter 1 . 6/11/2013
Nice going it is an interesting idea. hope you write the sequel
| ImagineBreaker7 chapter 1 . 11/1/2012
Nice romance scene
| ASTARCRAFTPLAYER chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
| Acolyte of the Blood Moon chapter 1 . 5/27/2012
I like it! Sequel please.
| The Red Star chapter 1 . 3/6/2012
I don't think I've ever said this, but I actually want to see the full lemon. Naruto/Robin happens rarely enough, why must you tease us? Anyway, the chapter itself is good. Introspective enough to be engaging without being annoying. Robin is very well characterized in this. She doesn't exactly get as much screen time as the other Straw Hats, so her deeper personality traits tend to be overlooked in favor of the more overt ones. It's good to see someone showing a little of the real Robin.
Only two errors for this one. Fourth sentence of the first paragraph, "haired" should be "hair". "her tongue entered her mouth" second "her" should be a "his", based on the context.
I really hope this pairing gets a little more love soon. Love from COMPETENT writers, I mean. I've been working on a concept for one of my own, but it's still in the early stages. Anyway, another good one, I demand a sequel!
Forever in the Sky,
The Red Star
| hanipman chapter 1 . 2/27/2012
Sequel! Too much curiosity grown from the simple statement of Naruto 'sleeping'. And I want to see Robin's reaction from knowing she's dating a a relic, if he is.
| naruhina pwns chapter 1 . 2/24/2012
This was done really well. Please do add to it!
| Validos chapter 1 . 2/23/2012
This story has a nice premise, and I would definitely read more. I saw a couple errors but nothing too serious. Hope to see more.
| Dracul666 chapter 1 . 2/22/2012
sequal man it just won't make sense without one i've read your lemons you are a god
| LuckyShadowWolf chapter 1 . 2/22/2012
Well I have to say that I will be disappointedif this isn't made into a multi chapter story because I could see you taking this far into the series based on Naruto's enigma-ity!
| shadow wolf125767 chapter 1 . 2/22/2012
love it, please make a sequel