|Reviews for Outcomes|
| finaljoy chapter 1 . 8/5/2013
Oh, I really like this story! It's vague in a deliciously ominous way, and I like the way you made Adelle so broken and cold, exactly what she seems to be on the outside. I also llove that Laurence is a demon in here. You could take this idea very far if you wanted :)
Wonderful job, loved reading it.
| Metronomeblue chapter 1 . 8/3/2012
Ouch. I always sort of shipped these two together, but this just drives it home how much possibility they had. I think the way you wrote their relationship was interesting, like they both thought of it as nothing realy important until it was half-gone. I also love that he changed the timeline. That was very bittersweet.
I like the idea of Adelle being able to see the future. It's very her. :)