|Reviews for On the Brink of Nothing|
| Fortune Zyne chapter 1 . 5/17/2012
Amazing and you can feel the emotions in the story. Well done!
| Live.Laugh.Love.Listen.Music chapter 1 . 3/16/2012
Amazingly emotive, well done.
| maglors harp chapter 1 . 2/27/2012
Beautiful. I enjoyed that. The fragmentation made it quite disquieting - I liked your technique in this story.
| Duilin chapter 1 . 2/24/2012
Written like a true author specialised in angst. Wow. The italics were really strong lines, and the description wrapped about them just added to the emotional, angsty feelings of the narrator telling the tale.
| The Wayfaring Strangers chapter 1 . 2/24/2012
So beautiful, so sad...the brink of eternity...You're making me wax poetic. I shall have to go and write.
| An Awestruck Reader chapter 1 . 2/23/2012
Wow, Mornen. All I have to say is wow. This is elegantly done, to the point (the worst thing you can do to angst is make it wordy) and just plain heartbreaking.
"How do you dream, when your heart is broken? Do you stand on the edge of nothing and throw your soul to the wind?"
And I thought I wrote well. *pout*
All in all, nice job. Can't wait for more from you! (And would you please update The Nearest Kin of Gods? :) )