|Reviews for Fool To Breathe|
| Forever Siriusly Sirius chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
Aww that is really cute! Short it may be but still xD
| Yellowtail555 chapter 1 . 6/2/2012
Wow... good job. You conveyed so much in so few words in such a powerful way. I love the whole middle bit so much but I must agree, it's a bit confusing when this takes place. Somewhere around 3rd, 4th, or 5th year I have to guess. Probably 5th but maybe you could have just added something to pin-point it.
Love it, Lily, like always :)
| keeptheotherone chapter 1 . 2/24/2012
Well, I am a H/G shipper, and I think it's brilliant :) Favorite line: "And even if she's not talking to him, she's filling up his world, ripping apart everything he thought he knew."
Just out of curiosity, did you have a time frame in mind when you wrote this?