Reviews for A Thousand Years Before the Land of Aaa
radi246810 chapter 1 . 6/21/2014
WHAT! THAT'S IT! NOTHING ELSE! WHY YOU LITTLE... *gets dragged away by security guards* Sorry, got a little carried away. Thanks for your stories, I love all of them! Write on!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/18/2014
ok
nekogirl017 chapter 1 . 9/23/2013
...lame
Skyfeather of RiverClan chapter 1 . 4/1/2013
3!
Angelina chapter 1 . 2/10/2013
O my gosh I get it Marshall will be 1000 years old when he meets fionna and cake right? Right? :)
ice wolf chapter 1 . 12/20/2012
I don't know if was sweet or sad. yeah it was kinda sad. but it was well written.
Campbell-Soup Girl chapter 1 . 11/5/2012
awesome, and please make another chap!
William Elric chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
hmmm a little fast but what the heck im not used to reading one shots good job and keep writing
Tmc chapter 1 . 7/10/2012
That was nice and sad
A-Girl-Brought-Forth-By-Tumblr chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
It is very nice yes, however, you are missing several crucial scenes, there wasn't much of description on what would happen to Fiona, or simply how the old hag knew what would happen, as vampires do NOT have the abilitiy to see the future.

It would have been more proper if it has shown Fionna being born and how Marshall knew it was HER.

I'm saying that it is missing lots of crucial pieces but otherwise beautiful.
ExoticaFatigue chapter 1 . 4/15/2012
*Cough* Sequel ... Thousand years..
Dr. Erskine chapter 1 . 2/22/2012
eh...it was okay. It could have been longer. At times, the story feels like it skips a few scenes and leaves a lot of vital questions unanswered.