Reviews for Memorial
Guest chapter 1 . 9/22/2014
I may be in love with your writing. Possibly. Hell, yes I am xD. Ozai forgetting his inner fire and wondering at how the avatar could be so cruel and being amazed at how torturous it is AND you presented him with emotion . KEEP WRITING !
jrba95 chapter 1 . 9/6/2012
Love it!
U.O. Zyzpm chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
L-O-V-E. The angst and the idea of this is brilliant. I feel like a regretful Ozai is a bit OC but then again these are his inner thoughts and I personally always love humanity over omnipresence. Keep writing!
The Animanga Girl chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
So deep and angsty!
Tinni chapter 1 . 2/24/2012
Really nice story! I liked it a lot!
Thomson chapter 1 . 2/23/2012
Very nice! It really makes you think.
ShoeNinja chapter 1 . 2/23/2012
You assigned a very believable depth of character to Ozai in this story. It was a unique premise...nice job!
Crazy Dyslexic Nerd chapter 1 . 2/23/2012
I like that. A lot of people have something against parents in Avatar-verse. I think some writers need lessons in Airbender philosophy. Everyone can change, everyone deserves a chance, even if they have to spend their lives imprisoned, they CAN change for the better, show a little remorse.

-Dyslexic Nerd
KityPryde chapter 1 . 2/22/2012
wow. That was haunting, but in a good way. I like it! :) It flowed nicely, the words and everything. There wasn't a moment when I didn't know what was going on. Very nice, almost makes you feel a little sorry for ozai even though he was such a ruthless jerk.
Kimberly T chapter 1 . 2/22/2012
Unusual, but nicely done!