|Reviews for Locked in Time|
| SoarenThrea chapter 1 . 7/19
This is just so beautifully done that I can practically *see* this happening in the manga.
It pains me every time I remember the original end and this lovely work helped alleviate the pain.
T_T Doumeki T_T Watanuki
My little Cinnamon Buns
| chars-aftercolony chapter 1 . 4/20
Love the warm, ethereal feeling this gave me. It reminded me of a lazy, quiet summer afternoon, spent lying in the grass, in the shade of a great, big, green tree. :) Thank you.
| L.J chapter 1 . 3/22/2015
This was so beautiful! Easily the best xxxHolic fic I've ever read, and perhaps the best CLAMP fic as well. It truly seemed like the deleted ending we never got-the language, imagery, and mythology all fit the original series perfectly. Absolutely loved it, I hope you will write more for the fandom, but if not, at least we have this gem. Thank you!
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/23/2014
This is amazing! I've always known Watanuki is meant for Doumeki but alas are his struggles with his life! Thank you for giving us a happier ending than the manga. I could really feel the strong emotions out of the once stoic Shizuka Doumeki. The plot is well made and I feel so sad about the dedication and sacrifice Haruka has made for his own grandson!
Thank you for reviving my childhood pairing-perhaps this too is hitsuzeb :D
| Black Kaitou chapter 1 . 7/11/2014
This was cool.
| TripOverFlatSurfaces chapter 1 . 2/21/2014
There's a lot feelings involved while I was reading this, especially since I'm re-watching the series and am currently on the Spider arc. These two are ridiculous honestly, they're perfect for each other. Thank you for sharing (wish this was canon lol)! :D
| PT-chan ssu chapter 1 . 8/19/2013
Tis Beautiful ;A;
Doumeki, Watanuki *sniff* I like this. This is the best actual ending I want for xxxHolic... unlike the actual semi-downer ending.
| Lonceng Angin chapter 1 . 6/11/2013
Your story reduced me into a weeping mess. I never thought I would read fanfiction about xxxHolic with beautifully done ending. Your story certainly collaborate with my wish that I will gladly paid if there was any dimensional witch who grants wishes and make this ending real.
I like how you write them. Not OOC, I think. You wrote their sadness, grieve, guilt, sorrow and regret nicely. I almost couldn't stop my tears from flooding my room. It's good and flawless, well, in my opinion (that wasn't matter much because of my bad excuse of English, anyway).
So, it is the end of my rambling.
| animemichy chapter 1 . 2/22/2013
i love youe story! yes oh
how i wish this was the ending of xxxholic!
i would pay any price!
| Ewon chapter 1 . 2/16/2013
This story is amazing! :)
| xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
I like it! **
| hali4qa chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
Thank you for this story, it's lovely, and it feels canonic. Seems exactly what Shizuka would do. I wonder if we'll see something like this next spring, when "xxxHolic" is to be resumed.
| Misery Lotus chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
That was so beautiful T_T
| Shounen-Ai chapter 1 . 8/2/2012
This was just gorgeous! I got a bit teary eyed for a moment.
| Will.Hell.Minna.-Sophia Isobel chapter 1 . 7/26/2012
I had mixed emotions while reading this... *sniff2x* Wonderful! _