|Reviews for on the off chance i could find you|
| ninjacatchester chapter 7 . 6/4/2013
| kaminoko-x chapter 1 . 3/9/2013
Kay, so I like this... I have no idea why exactly, it's hard to pinpoint specifics. Just, it's well written and... I think I just like everything. Yeah, that works. EVERYTHING is cool.
| sasuke's duck butt hair chapter 7 . 1/3/2013
Beautiful and incredibly touching!
| TheAnonymousPie chapter 7 . 12/26/2012
I love this story. I really do.
It's so descriptive, enough that you don't always have to explain a situation entirely, because you can rely on the reader's humanity to fill in the blanks. It's a form of writing that's very difficult to master, and it's impressive. I love the line, "Who would want to touch the ground, when they could race across the sky?" The actual words are so much richer than what can be found often in mediocre writing, and they seem to blend together and create this beautiful image in the mind.
If there's one critique I have, it's that I wish this story could have been longer.
| floating on clouds above chapter 7 . 10/23/2012
One of my favorite Naruto stories! (:
| floating on clouds above chapter 6 . 10/23/2012
Awesome chapter! (:
| floating on clouds above chapter 5 . 10/23/2012
| floating on clouds above chapter 4 . 10/23/2012
One of my favorite chapters. :D
| floating on clouds above chapter 3 . 10/23/2012
Lovely chapter! (:
| floating on clouds above chapter 2 . 10/23/2012
Such an emotional chapter. :D
| floating on clouds above chapter 1 . 10/23/2012
Awesome chapter! :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/1/2012
Love that you use Relient K songs as chapter titles. The song is insanely appropriate. Although you end the story kind of abruptly, it feels unfinished.
| Ashura-B chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
I'm sorry, my last review was incomplete because I accidentally hit 'send review'...anyways...
I'd like to ask for your permission to take small bits of the story and because I'm inspired by this story I'd like to make a similar plot :3 I don't write here, but I do on wattpad . :) I'm not using the Naruto characters but I only want the plot, well not an exact copy of it, only for the first few parts. Thank you. This story is very morbid but it's genius. Love is hinted subtly in a charming way :) please consider, and do PM me when you've come to a decision.
| Deya Amaya chapter 7 . 6/20/2012
There was no plot and then suddenly this last chapter :P cool
| Misery's-Toll chapter 7 . 5/25/2012
How do I begin to say all the things I loved about this story? It was so gritty and dirty, but fairy tale-esque. I loved how the only characters were Sakura, Karin, Sasuke, and his daughter. The world was so small, and in that I think you really got across the feeling of hopelessness and living in a world where no one was going anywhere. I particularly liked the tidbit about skytrains and how no one wanted to touch the ground when they could be in the air, but that the train tracks continued to dissolve in the acid rain. And just coffee and cigarettes were everywhere. I don't even know, just everyone was beautiful. Really wonderful, fantastic story.