Reviews for Legacy
Guest chapter 5 . 12/15/2013
This is not disappointing at all! Please continue writing! I can't wait for the next chapter!
JuneIparis chapter 1 . 9/8/2013
I dont know why on earth I took this long to read this. I'm usually not a can or FanFics that feature other characters, but I am in love with this. There are a few parts that are confusing and a bit out of character, but besides that it is wonderful. I'll read the whole fanfic and then give you a more in depth review over PM if u want me to. I'm JuneIparis if you ever want to PM me or look at my FanFics
Guest chapter 4 . 8/9/2013
#YoungLove3
Amazing and Awesome and Hard to describe with words! Update soon!
WorldFire77 chapter 5 . 6/20/2013
hey, TheInkredibleHanny :) The thing about fanfiction is that you can do whatever you want. If the Colonies are different than in the book, that's okay. If Eden isn't blind, that's okay. If June has a super creepy smile, that's okay. i would like to see where you go with this fanfic, so don't stop now! One thing i want to add... readers don't get much of a sense of who ROSE is. Does she have brothers or sisters? Parents who will miss her? Some more back-story would be nice :D
WiseChic chapter 5 . 6/9/2013
I think this story is great! You should keep going. :)

WiseChic
me chapter 4 . 5/17/2013
so cool, write more
WiseChic chapter 4 . 4/17/2013
Pleeeeease update?! This story is cool!
By chapter 4 . 2/8/2013
Ok I am 100% sure you are a professional written because that was… AWESOME
By chapter 3 . 2/8/2013
Omg so Paris is only Paris not day but you have to be a professional written because you are so good at this! Plz become a written and I will buy all your books
By chapter 2 . 2/8/2013
So is he Paris or day I have o find out!
By chapter 1 . 2/8/2013
Omg you should be a writer because that was so good! I just loved haw you played day into it so easily, and with the elector omg did not expect that. I love love loved it
Guest chapter 4 . 1/30/2013
make more chaptors
Irewole chapter 1 . 1/21/2013
You're simply beautiful. I'm in love
Guest chapter 3 . 1/8/2013
writ faster
Hungergamesluva chapter 3 . 1/5/2013
Really good so far! Can't wait for chapter 4 :)
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