Reviews for Love and betrayl
manga girl geek chapter 10 . 10/7/2012
Update update update
2Unknown4U chapter 10 . 2/27/2012
These chapters are good, but I can't help but feel that your rushing into the relationship. And then in chap 10 it says "And I hear Jaden shoving Jaden under water." Couldn't help but notice that. Other then that it was really good and I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work.
2Unknown4U chapter 6 . 2/26/2012
You update fast. Thanks for the chapter.
2Unknown4U chapter 5 . 2/25/2012
Its a great chapter, but it would help if you put a bit more detail in it. Other then that its alright, I just got confused on how the hell did Jason get into the chapter at the end.
2Unknown4U chapter 4 . 2/25/2012
Nice chapter, I wonder who char is.
2Unknown4U chapter 3 . 2/24/2012
Nice chapter I like the ending in this chapter. Keep up the good work.
2Unknown4U chapter 1 . 2/23/2012
That's a nice start. I like where the story is going. Great chapter and keep up the good work.
dbzgtfan2004 chapter 1 . 2/23/2012
This is a good story. Please continue. Jaden and Alexis forever.