Reviews for Not A Virgin
LunarCatNinja chapter 4 . 3/3/2014
I like the story! Tis nice.
Crowley For King chapter 4 . 6/13/2013
It was about as ironic to John as ten thousand spoons when one was in need of a knife.


"I have so missed your particular way with words."

Where my two favorite lines in this chapter. Very, VERY well done, my friend!
Crowley For King chapter 2 . 6/13/2013
John exhaled. "She knows. Oh, lord and biscuits, she knows. Suppose she thinks we're going to go shag now that she's left us alone."
"We aren't?"
John's heart nearly stopped. "Sherlock! We've only just kissed!"
"Well, if you say so. I won't press… But we will get to that eventually right?"
John threw a book at Sherlock, turning red but grinning like an idiot.

BRILLIANT! So well written and I was in stitches!
jbug chapter 4 . 3/12/2013
Lovely story! I enjoyed it VERY much.
Silvermoon of Forestclan chapter 2 . 9/2/2012
I loved the "She knows. Oh, lord and biscuits, she knows."
And Sherlock's comment about when he was four was adorable. John should totally bring that up in conversation next time he gets kidnapped by Mycroft.
addicted2fic chapter 4 . 6/3/2012
I'm so glad for this chapter. *sigh* a bit of angsty happiness for the end of my evening :)
Betty C chapter 3 . 5/31/2012
According to F1, "Cymbeline" i s listed among the tragedies. I am not sure I know what you're trying to say here. Is Sherlock supposed to be Imogen? If so, this paralel does not quite work ... sorry to point it out.
addicted2fic chapter 3 . 3/27/2012
so... john and sherlock were an established couple when he jumped? that's so sad.
Awesome-Sauce-Eater chapter 3 . 3/26/2012
Right, I'm probably being a proper idiot here, but I read the plot for 'Cymbeline' and...well

I don't get it :') Like, I don't get what John says and what it's got to do with it and please excuse me here as I am very tired and that is my excuse for being stupid.

But yeah, great story :)

NyteKit chapter 3 . 3/25/2012
The first two chapters of this had every reason why I love Sherlock in them. His blunt way of approaching things and lack of tact about anything emotional was just hilarious. Poor John never had a chance. I'm not sure if this is the end or if you plan to continue but I like what you've done with it so far.
Totally-Out-Of-It chapter 3 . 3/25/2012
lol 'but cybeline isnt a tragedy' - nice. pulling from life. Very nice. Good job. Very sneaky way of John being told/realizing Sherlock's a tricky bugger. Now you have to wonder if Victor knew or was just ranting.
Randoom chapter 2 . 3/12/2012
Oh, poor Sherlock. I can just see his confused/kicked puppy face when he says "we aren't gonna have sex?"

John is funny when he gets embarrassed. I think Sherlock will have to get pushy in the next chapter. Sherlock is not a patient man LOL.
Totally-Out-Of-It chapter 2 . 3/5/2012
lol "She thinks we're going to go shag now that she's left us alone." "We aren't?" it's like.. I can just see him randomly stopping in the middle of whatever violin song he was playing, spinning around to face John, and looking really confused. Like 'isn't that the next step in these situations?'


I also love John's exclamation of "Oh, lord and biscuits." And anytime Sherlock grabs someone's wrist in stories these days, everyone instantly thinks of Irene. Sherlock doing his 'check the physical signs' thing.

Great job.
addicted2fic chapter 2 . 3/5/2012
Poor blushing John, he's so easily embarrassed.
Magpie1600 chapter 2 . 3/4/2012
You've left me with a big smiley face now. Thanks.
21 | Page 1 2 Next »