|Reviews for Abnormal|
| tomorrow4eva chapter 5 . 4/17/2013
Awesome story! Yeah, I can see why she thinks she's abnormal. Would love to read a sequel some day. interactions between Vegeta & Marron were quite funny.
| LeChick chapter 5 . 2/3/2013
Marron's Dragon Ball Adventures sounds so awesome! Please continue!
| Guest chapter 4 . 2/3/2013
That's what Marron's dilemma reminded me of.
| LeChick chapter 3 . 2/3/2013
Oh no! Poor thing! Damn it Vegeta!
-My honest reaction
| elleelle chapter 5 . 11/25/2012
I'd love to read the sequel. I find Marron's perspective really interesting
| Death101- Fox Version chapter 5 . 3/9/2012
Looks good. A little sad that it is over but I'm hoping for a sequel. To be honest, it might have been better to leave it at the end of chapter 4. The last line just seemed to complete the story if you don't do the sequel. Anyways, nicely done!
| Death101- Fox Version chapter 4 . 3/9/2012
I never considered 17 showing up but I have to say I'm really glad that he did. He seems like an awesome uncle and I can't wait to see how their quest for the dragon balls go.
| Yoski chapter 5 . 3/8/2012
Ahhh, nice! I really hope we get to see the sequel. :D
| Hat O' Doom chapter 5 . 3/8/2012
| Not logged in chapter 5 . 3/8/2012
You can't be serious about this being the end it was so disappointing nothing happened. This story had so much potential and you end it like that. You must do a sequel or continue it because that was disappointing. Besides the ending it was shaping up to be a real good story and I liked the idea
| KimiruMai chapter 5 . 3/8/2012
I loved this so much, Veggie-san was soo cute too lol XD I hope you make a sequel! I want so see what happens to Marron and 17, also adorable XD Fantastic story, hope you continue with a sequel!
| ZeraZion chapter 5 . 3/8/2012
Wait! What? Why FIN? You can't end the story like this! What about Eighteen? What about the Dragonball adventures! What about the romance?(ok that I just want to happen with Trunks and Marron) But still, what the heck! Say it isn't so, women!
| Draquia chapter 4 . 3/5/2012
You know, I quite like this one. It's my first Marron-centred fic to read, and the fact that your story isn't just a way to hook Marron up with Trunks has already allowed it to have much more depth. Everyone is remarkably in character, although it's interesting to see the different sides of tougher characters when reacting to a little girl.
Which brings me to the only thing I found rather wrong with this story. You've got Marron down as ten years old. TEN. This is way too young for anyone to be considering her sexually, which is why I found Oolong's reaction to her request to play a card game rather terrifying. There's having the hots for minors, and then there's having the hots for CHILDREN. Freaky as, and I hope it never comes up again.
| ambvlnt.ideal chapter 4 . 3/5/2012
This has to be the most original fictions starring marron I have ever had the pleasure of reading. I really can't predict it and that's great. It's crossing boundaries that most people don't cross when they feature her in a fiction. I'm very excited about the rest of this story!
| KimiruMai chapter 4 . 3/5/2012
Eeee I love 17 :3 Uncle time! Now what're they gunna do wit them there Dragon Balls, eh? LOL Update soon!