Reviews for The Savior and The Fox
misswb xx chapter 3 . 8/31/2016
plesrs update it amazing chapter 4 . 8/2/2016
are u updating this? its better than the original. For one thing, the grammer's good. Although, I like the name kibi better. I mean, kurama seems rather inappropriate for what appears to be a tiny, cute fox. Try shortening it to kury.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/20/2015
die you fucking motherfucker, i hope its slow and painfull you worthless fag
dude chapter 4 . 8/26/2014
update pls
CrystalVixen93 chapter 4 . 1/25/2014
Can't wait to see what happens next so I hope u update again soon plz.
Jarjaxle chapter 4 . 3/30/2013
I say Yes To Kurotsuchi and Samui into harem...hey he need that Beutiful hot blonde from Kumo and Nice Iwa Kunoichi into his harem...It makes things very intersting...XD
I love your fic topugh very funny and interesting
HeLiiOS chapter 4 . 3/24/2013
When all of those females get there, it's gonna suck sooooo bad for Naruto... I kind of feel bad for him lol
TheRazgrizDragon chapter 4 . 3/20/2013
I have too admit that this is a great story so far, I haven't laughed like that in a long time, the plot is good and it thick in story but simple and too the point. This has quickly become a true favorite, and I look forward to what you do with it. The harem list is impressive and I see why you picked them. First though I noticed Toki wasn't on the list yet you did mention her; I'm going to assume she's included but you forgot to list her. The only one I don't like is Sakura for obvious , but I always respect writer's choice, so you'll get no complaints from me on that is you go through with it. The other things for the maybes are Kurotsuchi as hell yes, think of the possibilities with Iwa hating his dad, and I would also like to agree with Amaru for beside Shion, Haruna, Hinata. and Shizuka, no one else in the stories showed true feelings for Naruto with hints, though I could go either way with that with Koyuki as well. The only other girl I would like to see in the harem is Misao. That OC has a lot of potential to good things, and besides annoying Kurama with is always funny, I think she was a good character. She unlike a lot of the other girls wasn't looking at him for lust and his staying pure for the right guy. I'm not saying she wasn't going fangirl, but she seemed to try and win him over by merits rather then flirting. So I say yes too her, and after her nay on the rest and lot of them. I also can't wait for the marriage thing to pop it's self In the open and I would also like to see him deal with the good old leaf council, eh. Well I look forward too your next work, and once again wonderful job on this story so far,
bankai777 chapter 3 . 3/17/2013
naruto's life will never be dull and boring at all.
bankai777 chapter 2 . 3/17/2013
it sure looks like that naruto is happy being back in konoha.
bankai777 chapter 1 . 3/17/2013
shizune should have put habanero hot sauce in tsunade's sake.
bankai777 chapter 4 . 3/17/2013
i wonder what would kushina and mito say about naruto's love life.
Dregus chapter 4 . 3/15/2013
a gaara harem? thats new. but considering his sand could be a bloodline (his father had gold dust, and so did the third kazekage meaning a posible relation there, so 'sand' as regular or metal could be a bloodline)
Guest chapter 3 . 3/15/2013
the buttscratcher thing is from family guy
agui972 chapter 4 . 3/15/2013
been a couple of months... it was ok the additions you put were good still waiting on your own chapter not one of these which has the original author's work and some parts you change or added no! I want a original chapter from you not sure when that will be maybe in a year or two? anyway i can wait and update soon
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