Reviews for Iceberg
Lemonsnaps chapter 1 . 6/11/2012
We all know that there's much more to Noel than meets the eye, but those muscles and eyes of his are a pretty da*n good place to start ;). Great job! :D
shiks chapter 1 . 5/13/2012
dawww yeah Noel is a awesome guy. wish there were some like him in reality :C. such a shame.
Puru chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
This was so beautiful... I fell in love with your writing three sentences in. The entire oneshot was perfect.
moonlightlunalaa chapter 1 . 2/27/2012
This is the first Noel/Serah that I read now that I've beaten the game and I'm glad I picked yours. Even BEFORE beating the game Noel/Serah became my Final Fantasy 13(2) OTP's.

It was short and sweet and it ended nicely. The one-shot was sufficient enough to get your point across.

I hope you do more Noel/Serah stories in the future.
wynteralchemyst chapter 1 . 2/25/2012
This was a sweet story. I love how you describe the delicate nature of Noel and Serah's in-game relationship, which is basically enhanced through their glances, gentle words, and mutual understanding. It does seem that wherever Noel and Serah go, people are somewhat astonished to see such opposites together, but I like how you connect them through their differences. I have no criticism grammar or syntax-wise (kudos!) and I really enjoyed reading it. Thanks for writing!
L' Ame Force chapter 1 . 2/24/2012
Interesting take on Noel's personality. I never would have pegged him to be in that stereotype, despite some of his body expressions in the game to a little annoying (in a cocky manner). Maybe it's because he appears to be a touch dramatic to me in his sappiest moments. I mean, saying to Yuel "A future without you is no future at all," is a bit too over the top XDD
xSapphireLightsx chapter 1 . 2/24/2012
Hm *ponders for a second*...could the title Iceberg be a reference to Titanic maybe? o.o the scientists words are like a shipcrasher? Or maybe that's how people view Noel as this mysterious block of ice that floated out of nowhere that you shouldn't steer towards? He's so cool he IS ice? He's an icy disaster? T.T come am I remotely close?

And dang it this was a cute one, showing someone's view on how they might interpret Noel (let's face it though, that scientist had the hots for Serah completely lol x3). It's was sweet reading how Serah came about the answer to 'why IS she with him' without having gvien the answer out loud. Like an act of 'i'm not listening to you' as she walked away, loved it XD

And dang it, that Noel is a charmer with chocobos that it's too cute! If they were humans they'd be asking him for his autograph XD or they run off with his pouch with all the yummy chocobo food in it, yep.

Great job kupo!
aimakichan chapter 1 . 2/23/2012
Noooooo... why is this so short? Part 2? Can't get enough of how you write Noel/Serah!
Fan chapter 1 . 2/23/2012
Great! Short but sweet.