Reviews for Spirited Away |
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EmPro8 chapter 10 . 3/15/2018 THERE we go! Complicated matters. Danny couldn't live the good life forever. |
EmPro8 chapter 9 . 3/15/2018 My only critique for this is that you need to heighten the stakes for Danny. I know you write this a really long time ago, but if you ever do something like this again it's unrealistic for Danny to gallavant around without interference. He's breaking rules too. Ingenious hilarity aside, without something to lose, it just gets boring. We all know Dolores is an evil woman, let her act like one. Threaten to raise his number of years of attendance, threaten his family, have someone figure out he has a secret and use it against him, employ law enforcement. There's lots of things that can put Danny in a very sticky situation, where he would need to make tough choices. If you ever write something like this again, utilize those risks. But I'm glad Harry and co. didn't immediately join cure. Hogwarts is Harry's home, and he won't be very willing to listen to anything that criticizes or threatens it, especially if it involves Hagrid. Ron would love a chance to get rid of any of the targeted teachers (like you said), but isn't very trusting. And Hermione, of course, would initially hate anything that criticizes the school officials. Though tbh, I can understand Dumbledore's perspective. Finch would likely become homeless if he got fired, and being so dull to the point if sleep isn't really something you can fire a teacher for. I've got a feeling that Umbridge is more of a government requirement than a choice, and we all know why Albus keeps Snape around. (Things will only become more complicated when Harry needs to learn Occulemcy from Snape. Without Snape to teach, Harry becomes vulnerable). They should reach a compromise: Any abusive teachers will conform to bsttee teaching strategies and dangerous circumstances will be taken more seriously, IF the students will cease to promote CURE and Danny finishes the year quietly. Seems fair, doesn't it? |
EmPro8 chapter 8 . 3/15/2018 They really should call law enforcement on Danny. That's what I would do if I were one of the teachers. (Unless they don't WANT law enforcement snooping around. They did kidnap him, after all). |
EmPro8 chapter 6 . 3/15/2018 By the end of this, Dumbledore is gonna wish that he endured Umbridge's hailstorm than Danny's bitter wrath. |
EmPro8 chapter 5 . 3/15/2018 This is a delight to read. |
EmPro8 chapter 4 . 3/15/2018 Danny is gonna tick off absolutely everybody |
EmPro8 chapter 2 . 3/14/2018 wow this is absolutely incredible. Danny, his parents, the pacing, his parents, Dumbledore, his parents, the laws, his parents... I really like this so far |
Salem chapter 21 . 2/23/2018 I love the ending! I didn’t think Danny could be that annoying and make a rebellion. I love the ghost honey badger and the fact of the whole chuck Norris crap XD. I also think it was funny that the boomerang kept whacking Harry’s forehead. I don’t think there is a sequel (though I am bad at focusing on stories unless they are what I specifically am looking for) but I think that you couldn’t really add anything since you basically finished the series if this did happen. I was actually looking for one where Danny and his family go to hogwarts to teach a class or something, but eh I found this. Have a good afternoon/night/ and or day, Love, Salem |
Zani45 chapter 21 . 2/9/2018 This fanfic has brought me laughter for approximately 1 hr and 12 minutes. Thank you. |
Bones027 chapter 21 . 2/6/2018 this was an amazing crossover, and I loved reading it! |
tomahawkESP chapter 16 . 2/6/2018 Voldemort ain’t got SHIT on chuck norris! |
tomahawkESP chapter 8 . 2/6/2018 * Gives amazing, slow-smoked bacon to Overlord Randall * |
tomahawkESP chapter 6 . 2/6/2018 I’m sorry, but I have to ask; WHY THE HELL AREN’T YOU STILL DOING THIS AWESOME STORY?! |
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 2 . 2/4/2018 Oooh wait! Evil Danny! Dan breaks free, as Clockwork knew he would, and begins his revenge. Unfortunately for Danny, Dan turns his attention to the Wizarding World first, because he had to destroy them too in his DarkFuture, and wants to level the odds by a) stealing the Time Turners to keep Clockwork from meddling anymore, and b) use Voldemort's knowledge of shredding one's soul, to create a weapon to use against ghosts. The Wizarding World does not recognize what they are dealing with at first however, initially believing it is only a powerful sorcerer (or the Fentons are on vacation traveling the globe and the owls cannot keep up), leading to a bloody situation. Would also allow Harry a chance to fulfill the Prophecy as the Chosen One... |
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 1 . 2/3/2018 A fantastic story that I just loved, laughing all the way! To my surprise, I think Jack Fenton was my favourite given how he reacted to threats to his son, but also the part where you saw the similarity between him and Danny when gleefully saying they would keep the unconscious Death Eaters secure. That is not to say Danny was not a delight, particularly his first reactions upon being kidnapped, or Danielle vs. Vlad I have read a lot of critiques on how Hogwarts has been handled, but yours gets points for a few new bits as well as emphasizing the problems, and most of all how hilarious it was done! All the badgers were awesome :-) For a sequel, the best I can suggest is that the Golden Trio, during summer break, come to see Danny since he is a) a friend, and b) they need his help revolutionizing the wizarding laws so they are less pro-Pureblood. Unfortunately they come at a time when one of Danny's greatest threats gets involved, and they get swept up in it. Hmm, Vlad and/or the Men in White learning about Voldemort, and want to free him to learn his Horcux techniques to study the art of shredding off part of one's soul? Or rather, the souls of enemy ghosts? Looking forward to more of your work! |