|Reviews for Road to Master|
| Guest chapter 11 . 2/16
please continue the story, as you write very good.
| mark chapter 11 . 2/3
Sweet Ash won! So who will be the 4th Elite Four member? And do Ash and Elesa finally get together?
| mark chapter 9 . 2/3
Haha xD Elesa booking the earliest flight to Kanto. I think there'll be some rivalry soon
| dragoncreators chapter 10 . 2/2
electric wires to your nipples O.o;.
| dragoncreators chapter 6 . 2/2
Wow, this will be great, Zapdos with electric/flying against bruno fighting, Thundorous against Agatha with his dark attacks and if he did it, Zekrom against Lance.
| shedges19 chapter 11 . 1/28
hi there are you doing more of road to master
| Naomi Shihoin chapter 11 . 1/9
Are you going to continue this?
| MidnightFenrir chapter 11 . 1/9
That's an impressive story you have here. Sure you wrote a lot of battles but man, it sure never was boring! I see that you have stopped writing for a bit more than two years now and i'd like to know if you plan on continuing this strory in the future, thank you for your time.
| Guest chapter 11 . 1/3
Why u no update its a very good story
| KamiIsGod chapter 2 . 12/25/2013
Oh my gawd... This has to frieken be the best story ever! Nice job mate!
| regfurby chapter 11 . 12/23/2013
Battles were pretty simplistic, with low move variety and almost no strategy involved (70% of it can be summed up as 'use X attack against Y attack until they cancel out or one overpowers the other' or 'take the opponent's attack and return an attack of your own'). Not as interesting as it could have been.
| doubledamn chapter 11 . 11/13/2013
As much as I love the story. The thing I'm going to LOVE the most is Brock's reaction to this developing relationship.
| doubledamn chapter 9 . 11/13/2013
With all those elctric types around him, it seems that Ash has developed a magnetic personality.
| doubledamn chapter 7 . 11/13/2013
Ash really is stupid. I get the whole 'keep the best a secret' thing, but seriously? You are fighting the Elite 4, considered the best of the best of the best, you have TWO LEGANDARIES at you disposal, and you choose to NOT USE THEM!?
| doubledamn chapter 6 . 11/13/2013
Well that was good. I can only hope that Bruno doesn't 'reward' Ash in the same way...