|Reviews for Fragments Of A Life Less Lived|
| emmacbswan chapter 8 . 3/8
oh God! just begun to read this awesome story ! i love it with all my french "not so good in english" heart ...you make my day...
| Lightning.Regina chapter 36 . 3/1
Thank you very much for this Wonderfully crafted Story! :o
| SinginPrincess chapter 36 . 2/17
This was incredibly painfully beautiful. It hurts so much, especially with that ending. But your writing, and your understanding of the characters was magnificent.
| PlsWriteFurther chapter 36 . 2/11
this was awesome...YOU are awesome
wow - excuse me- WOW! Just...wow...
| Loveblueocean chapter 36 . 2/1
A very good SQ fic. I loved it.
| Regina Emma chapter 1 . 1/30
WOW! This is seriously an EPIC epic! Just Fantastic! The chemistry is s.i.z.z.l.i.n.g! XD
Thank you so much for writing this! Love LOVE LOVE it!
| Guest chapter 36 . 1/20
Gah! Great writing. You're very talented. I do regret reading this though because the ending was just devastating, and now I'm sad.
| Guest chapter 33 . 1/12
This is just precious! I can't believe I've been ignoring your story for a while now just to realize how beautiful this actually is...
| Stacy Vorosco chapter 36 . 12/29/2013
I'm so in love with your story and my heart is slowly breaking into tiny agonizing pieces right now DX I can't wait to start the sequel and find out what's going to happen now.
Your writing is amazing and I just can't get enough
| ShadowCub chapter 36 . 12/28/2013
So tired of fics where Regina is constantly begging the Charmings, fuck em.
| emmaliefje chapter 36 . 12/26/2013
Aaah, what have you done?! My heart, my heart... Thank god there's a sequel!
Can't. Stop. Reading...
| emmaliefje chapter 26 . 12/26/2013
Aaaw! This chapter is my favorite so far! So domestic and happy and wowser that last scene made me blush - and I don't blush easy! ;) So many gems in this chapter! My favorites were:
"He (Graham) had frowned about that for quite some time." - this one made me laugh way too much. I can totally see him doing that. :)
"When he was about thirty or something (Henry would be able to understand/love Regina)." Great line! :)
The small scene about 'politeness' made laugh as well. It's very recognizable. When you're hiding something, a relationship, it's very easy to overdo it. I love that Emma just points that out, point-blank. Very Emma-like. :)
The whole section on how Regina used to handle begging was spot-on. It really gave in insight in how she's changed and how she's handling being changed. How Emma is affecting her. How you that somehow tied back perfectly in how Henry is hopeful that Emma can "save" the Evil Queen.
Last but not least: the last scene. I feel a little awkward commenting about it because duh, but I've noticed something and I'm pretty sure it's not a coincidence. Only in one other instance have they done together what they did this chapter, and that was also a moment of emotional intimacy (Regina opening up about not wanting to lose Henry), not just physical intimacy. You do a really great job of letting the sex scenes reflect their emotional vulnerability in that moment. It's even in WHAT they do (going down on each other when they're at their most vulnerable, as my current example). Maybe it's way awkward, but I just noticed that and I think that's a great writing choice. :)
Okay, gonna keep reading now!
| emmaliefje chapter 12 . 12/26/2013
A third of the way through, and I'm hooked! This is so great. The characterization is... amazing, delicious, everything I look for in a story. I love the come here-go away game Regina is constantly putting Emma through. You effortlessly write out Regina's reasons and Emma's confusion and desperate wish to understand WHY Regina is doing this. I hoped, with the last chapter, that it was over, that Regina could really let her walls down. But, there's 24 chapters left so I also knew that couldn't be the case. Definition of angst: setting up hope to shatter them, and then as a reader, signing up for more.
Bottom line: this is really great so far, I'm in love with how you write both of them, and I'm going to devour the rest of this story as fast as my eyes can tear through it. :)
| Wissa38 chapter 17 . 12/3/2013
I love this story. It's wonderfully written. And it breaks my heart over and over. As a mother of an adopted child, I just want to cry the way Henry treats Regina. And I often want to see Emma stand up for Regina more. Oye.
Great story. Thanks for writing.
| Jaxon21 chapter 36 . 11/16/2013
OMG...I guess...I'm dead! You totally got me! And the finale...oh my Regina...well done, dear!