Reviews for A Gift
twilightmortaldivergent chapter 26 . 8/24
Wheres the rest
Mirage chapter 26 . 8/12
ohhh no, please dont do this and abondone your Story now at this Point...please cant you write some more chaps and an end...PLEASE!
i really want to know what happens next, will Harry really vorgive Lucius, and what about Severus...sure i could kick the guy where it really hurts and then to tomorrow...but nobody deserves to stay alone and be kicked away by both him mates ...
maybe he should swear a oat, on his Magic, that he never will do something against Harrys wish, that he will try to know him that he will try to talk and learn more that he will respect him and care for him and so...i mean that would give the Boy a big security blanket and peace of the mind and will help him work things out with Severus, and come to an understanding, as he mostlikely i with child he should look out for this two Babys, they want there fathers, and mostlikely Need them too. So maybe with an oat they can learn to know each other, to respect each other, to trust each other...the message of the day is -talk with each other- this is important ...and i dont think that Harry really want to be taken away from his new halfdemon friend...i mean they never could work out and sex is out of questin as this would hurt to much...
so maybe kick sev and lucius too and then let them swear an well worded oat!

please please come back soon and write more

ist now the already the 8 month of 2015
Mirage chapter 23 . 8/11
see i know it only the blood is interesting...stupid ass severus...
first he Wakes one who Needs sleep to heel, then he is a bully and askes harshly and then as the poor Thing reacts on instinct and gets away from him he only thinks about hurting him, breaking him, punishing him...they should love and cherrish him like the law did say, i think he is really bether off with the Ministerium or the hald demon...
Mirage chapter 22 . 8/11
i so hope Ron will get taken his Magic away and send away to muggle London, he deserves this...
and that severus gets some big kicks and slapps and whatever...he is such a stupid guy...
i wonder...Harry was dead for some Moment...should the bond be not broken? and why did they not feel it...why does severus still thinks only of the poor Boys blood...such a bastard...
Mirage chapter 8 . 8/11
that is nice that Dumles is a nice on in this Story, ist something else, in some he is nice in other he fits so perfectly in his bad Person role
Sev is stupid and Luc even more for believing it...
MsBloodlove chapter 26 . 8/4
I really hope this gets continued! Awesome story though Snape is proving to be the most idiodic ass of a man to walk the earth!
louisejtwin2 chapter 26 . 7/23
Really good
WolfDancer1229 chapter 26 . 7/9
I would love to see more of this story! I'm sure life is keeping you busy but it would be great if you could pick up this story again, I'm enthralled!i hope you can find time for this story cause it is an amazing,y awesome one!
ankoku696 chapter 26 . 6/21
Will there be more to this story soon? Will severus pull his head out of his ass and see that harry could and would love him if he would see harry instead of james reincarnated? Will he finally see that harry was never the spoiled little child that he thought?
Guest chapter 26 . 6/7
Please update soon
D- Equis Zahhak chapter 16 . 5/24
AJKHLERURHQJERHTLQNW ERR GAAAAAAHH BRO ITS PLATINUM NOT BLOND! srry just had to vent my ocd went cra cra
Guest chapter 26 . 5/21
Could you pleas finish A Gift it's so good and you stopped just as things started getting interesting. It's been months now since you've last updated so yea again pleas update the story if you could.
pineapple69 chapter 26 . 4/30
Great Story, cant wait for the next chapter.
Kat chapter 26 . 4/20
Love this story! Please finish it and don't abandon it. :) can't wait for the next chapter!
D- Equis Zahhak chapter 23 . 4/14
YAAAAAAAAAAADSSSZSSS
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