Reviews for Phase 18: Alternate Scene
Guest chapter 1 . 6/11/2016
Wow very satisfied much beter than what happened in the anime
Guest chapter 1 . 12/6/2015
risenfromash chapter 1 . 10/5/2015
Just watched this scene tonight and I think this is a really good take on what shod have happened had they wanted to explore this sexual theme more. What bothered me with the scene was that I wanted Shu to pull her up to his face and kiss and snuggle her not just bark at her to stop. So my vision is similar to yours but still different. Your version is very believable and well done and if you could write this in an hour I'm pretty darn jealous
cloudnine chapter 1 . 7/9/2015
Man that was awesome! thats how I wished it happened too. at least one token to take with him with the masacre that ensued after
Td03 chapter 1 . 9/28/2014
Is it wrong for me to love this? Man, this is probably the only one of a kind of the one of a kind lemon scene that stayed true to their characters and not just the main character throwing away his morals to have sex. This freaking awesome I don't know if I should feel guilty for loving this or praise you for writing it. I'll opt the latter.
Kaori chapter 1 . 1/16/2014
pampoo chapter 1 . 11/17/2013
Seems legit. Love it. :)
Beck Neard chapter 1 . 10/26/2013
Goddamn man, all I can say is you did an amazing job at keep the characters as themselves.
Nicely done... would love for you to write more ;)
Yanna Blake chapter 1 . 10/12/2013
Oh goooosh I finished Guilty Crown a while ago. Oh gosh is it amazing. Great story! :D
The Final Conduit chapter 1 . 8/10/2013
That was very good. It was more in character than about 95% of lemons are. Good writing.
ItsComplicatedOkay chapter 1 . 3/9/2013
I liked how you made it fit into canon, instead of just changing the whole plot by having Shu throw away his morals to have sex with Inori.

Good job!
Lost Guy chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
is it wrong for me to love this story? and more importantly is it wrong for me to want to read another? i can't tell anymore.
OoOXylionOoO chapter 1 . 8/5/2012
Great now I have to re watch all guilty crown :)
LostSeraph23 chapter 1 . 6/27/2012
Amazing. Simply amazing.
zeprincelini chapter 1 . 4/10/2012
Awesome, wish this had happened.
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