Reviews for Stareye
Howlsong14 chapter 1 . 4/8/2013
Hmm pretty good!
Hey chapter 1 . 2/27/2012
Hey Nay is gothic rainbow I can only review once per chapter but I noticed a mistake in the story "died 5 years was the only wolf he had ever loved." This does not make any sense considder this

"died five years ago, Larka was the only wolf he had ever loved."

Ok then, Au revoir
Naruthirnith-of-Greenwood.001 chapter 1 . 2/24/2012
Hey Nay! Listen the storys ok but would there really be rotting flesh and bones still, think about birds of pray and other animals that would eat the remains, but its a nice start keep going...
dont get it chapter 1 . 2/24/2012
Hi i dont actually get this so yeah its alright i guess but it needs inprovment