Reviews for Mates For Life
Guest chapter 8 . 5/26
Not trying to be rude (of course it will come off that way, because that is what I'm being) but it's kind of pathetic to take down your story just because you were getting rude messages from some loser online. I of course don't know what story you're talking about, but I just find it so weak to lose your passion for something based off of one (a million) opinions. So hopefully you never had much passion for it in the first place.
katie chapter 18 . 4/3
I want more chapters I love the story
jk chapter 12 . 2/10
Edwards telling bella about his family...
theres jasper and his mate alice
their made for each other

theres Emmett and his mate rose
they balance each other out, their perfect for each other

theres carlise and his mate esma
made for each other

LOL- their MATES ITS FUCKING OBVIOUS THAT THIER MADE FOR EACH OTHER...HENCE THE WORD "MATE"
jk chapter 11 . 2/10
LOL that's he deal? sniff sniff sniff sniff I cant...oh I just cant...cause when I was 9...sniff sniff...

how many years ago was that bella? if you really don't like vamps cause one killed your mom 20 years ago then why the fuck are you in a club surrounded by vamps? if you hate vamps and their everywhere...wouldn't you just hide out at home? or actually go into hiding so you don't run into them? seems to me that your just a drama queen who likes attention...OR the writer is having a VERY hard time writing angst that is believable
jk chapter 10 . 2/10
soooo heres where I'm confused...if vamps have only one mate then how in the fuck do human females have multiple? why would vamps fight over her if they only have one mate? in any fight one would be fighting for a girl that's not really thiers! it makes no sense...I get that you want angst or some shit but really? that's just stupid.
all Edward had to do was look into her eyes and bam he knew that was his mate...so if its this instant magical connection...why would a male vamp fight for a female that's already mated? see! it makes no sense!
wantonlytoread chapter 19 . 1/21
Nearly 4 years later and no rewrite... :(
fanfictionalcolic chapter 19 . 1/2
Hope you will update
Guest chapter 7 . 9/21/2015
Erm
jk chapter 10 . 9/4/2015
I don't get it. if vampires mate then theres only one for them...so why in the fuck would peter think bella was his?
TheAddicted chapter 1 . 8/11/2015
Would you please get your ass back to and finish this story. Girl you just cant leave me hanging with him on his way to knock her up?! PS: you Got me addicted to your version of the Twilight Universe and i simply need to know about the rest of their story with kids and other male mates to Bella.
Guest chapter 8 . 6/24/2015
i think edward shld be gentler.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/24/2015
cool..
EvilIzzy chapter 4 . 10/25/2014
When did Bella learn Edward's name?
Guest chapter 4 . 8/7/2014
This looks like a really bad porn movie. Oh, wait! Maybe not bad, but dirty porn anyway.
josayow chapter 19 . 7/28/2014
you said you wouldnt abandon the story, I hope you're still thinking about re writing it , cause this is a great story
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