Reviews for The First: Id de Nomen The root of the name
Crystalyna du Starrvan chapter 3 . 5/24
love this story!
MysticPuma chapter 3 . 7/3/2014
I like the plot, but I found this fic so hard to read, simply because of the grammar...
Guest chapter 3 . 8/29/2012
I really loved it :) It was very sweet!
thezooqueen chapter 1 . 8/29/2012
I love the plot so far. I want to continue reading it. 3

I found many grammatical and spelling errors. Some parts it was hard to follow because the story wend from one thought to the next so the reader does not know it is a change of scene. (please don't hate me for pointing these out. I am not trying to be mean. I really want to continue reading your story!)
Yo chapter 3 . 6/14/2012
I didn't like the language Prof. Grabiner had. But overall the story was really sweet.
Yo chapter 2 . 6/14/2012
much better. Sad that her parents left.
Yo chapter 1 . 6/14/2012
confused towards the end. And a few errors in spelling, but overall not bad.
alicetsuki13 chapter 3 . 3/5/2012
love your story!

It's so cute~~

write again please, i look forward to it
hippiewitch77 chapter 3 . 2/27/2012
I love this! Please continue. :)
Mldy96 chapter 1 . 2/25/2012
I have to agree with someone about the word 'expelled' not fitting the story, and that eighter 'abandoned' or 'disowned' would be better, latter being the best option (at least for me). Although I found a "few" grammar mistakes, the story itself caught my interest and I'm looking foward for the next chapter.

noname chapter 1 . 2/24/2012
I think this story is already great and I can't wait to read the next chapter! :) However,...

I must note that 'expelled' might not be the best word for Cesia's situation as it's the synonym of 'kicked out of school' (which is not the case here) rather than 'abandoned'. But aside from this, I like your story