Reviews for Ocean Currents
Edhla chapter 1 . 5/10/2013
Hey :) Without knowing the fandom and without knowing specifically what kind of concrit you're looking for in this, I have to say that you've done a damn good job, particularly with your visual descriptions. The dialogue tends to repeat a couple of times, but that's not necessarily a bad thing; it's a great approximation of how people really do talk. I thought there was the occasional tendency to overexplain why people are saying the things they say, and how they're saying it, but it really doesn't detract from the fic too much. Nicely done x
Angela Pirate Ryoko chapter 1 . 4/8/2012
This is pretty. I liked imagining the roar of the ocean behind their conversation.