|Reviews for Crimson|
| TheMoonAlwaysFalls chapter 1 . 8/4/2013
I rarely ever read a story with a rating less than M, and even more rarely review, but there was just something about this piece that I liked. (And it's always nice to get a review on an older story.)
I think it may have been Elwood's characterization that I liked so much. It's spot on, very mellow and slightly melancholy. It flowed nicely with the tone. The tone itself is lovely as well - divey and dark. Your OC's personality is strong, but not overbearing - also fitting nicely with the tone. All in all, a great piece.
(One thing I noticed that I thought I'd mention is that the car is a Dodge Monaco, not a Crown Vic. The body styles are similar, though, and Crown Vic's are still frequently used as cop cars. I'm somewhat of a car junkie. _)
| PinkGloom chapter 1 . 6/14/2012
I love it! The part about 'a long mellow kiss' totally hits the way I imagine Elwood would kiss. :)
| sherwood76 chapter 1 . 6/11/2012
Total delight-the contrast of blue and red here and the sassy voice of Vera is irresistible.