Reviews for Parachute
Sailor Pandabear chapter 1 . 7/20
this is very nice
Catmint chapter 1 . 9/10/2014
Wonderful writing. Your characterisation is spot-on and you've captured the emotions really well - I could feel them coming out through the words.
VG LittleBear chapter 1 . 4/26/2014
Hi, this is very beautiful. Tony is written as I like him best. And Ziva responds to his thoughtfulness.
Thank you very much! Cheers!
Okkey chapter 1 . 1/2/2013
Hi, really loved this and am hoping you might want to continue with this story.
xoxonessie chapter 1 . 10/13/2012
waow that was lovely. I loved it! The last line was perfect.
rebecca-in-blue chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
What a great story! I love how you have Ziva open up and talk to Tony about her past. That last line just made me smile - so glad that Tony worked up the nerve to say it. :)
Robern chapter 1 . 3/24/2012
absolutely loved this story, it even brought tears to my eyes, very well written.
Paperclip-Assassin chapter 1 . 2/28/2012
it IS quite a solid one-shot, but Jeez, how can you not continue this? It pracically screams to be continued! :DD and i'd love to read more
Elizabeth318 chapter 1 . 2/25/2012
Wow! You are an incredible writer - looking forward to reading more of your stories!
13NCISgirl chapter 1 . 2/24/2012
Cute! :)
firstadream100 chapter 1 . 2/24/2012
How can you think this is a oneshot? You have to, HAVE TO continue this story! Soon!
NCIStwin1 chapter 1 . 2/24/2012
I loved this story! For some reason it just struck me as amazing. I love the 22 shots to Tali part, it was incredibly sweet of Tony. I hope you decide to continue this one day!
Tiva lovah chapter 1 . 2/24/2012
I loved every part of this- so well written!
JustSillyLittleMe chapter 1 . 2/24/2012
This is really good x cant wait to see what happpends x