Have just finished reading the trilogy, all I can say is WOW. Very good storytelling.

This was brilliant. The times wimpy stuff has my head spinning!

I read this when I was out of town a while back and forgot to come back for my review. I should have left short ones as I read because there was so much to comment on and I can't remember all the little things I wanted to say. This was a remarkable story and it was such a pleasure to be able to read it while I was away. I looked forward to it every night. The plot was fascinating, your OC and his motivations wonderfully done. The chess references were brilliant, and the end was jaw-droppingly amazing and creepy. I really liked the Jack/Ianto relationship, as usual in your stories. You write a strong Ianto and a devoted Jack and I love that. And the smut. ;) I have to admit that there are sometimes some Jack/Gwen moments (either this one or the last, I can't remember) that sort of make me squirm, but that's realistic, isn't it? Sweeping the Jack/Gwen stuff under the rug probably isn't.
This was a wonderful set of stories, fantastic job. You're a great writer and I'm looking forward to reading the other stories that follow Fragmented! Thanks for sharing!

Wow loved the ending , loved the whole thing :D
Thank you its an awsome series :D

I like how you tie in Flat Holm. But I don't like that Patrick is capable of knowing who they are. Old age won't keep him from trying to kill them. And he will terrorize Ianto f for life.

Okay tears with that last part.

Okay it's been a while but you made me cry again with this one.

And she was an alien! Hence her arm!

By the way, you didn't mention it this time, but Gwen isn't second-in-command. If you listen to Owen on the one with the real Captain Jack, he tells Ianto he is s-i-c.

Preferably dead!

So he went to Flat Holm?

Really enjoying all of your stories so far, had a good chuckle about the Shark Attack 3 mention, hahahaha

So brilliant That was amazing. The story-line was exceeding well-developed. You had me hooked from the beginning and I couldn't stop until I finished (which took me all of 3 hours mind you). Everyone was in character and it was great!

The only comment that I have is the rating. There are some chapters where it might seem to be too graphic for a T rating, so you might want to consider changing that to M. But it's not a really big deal.

Great job!

Shall I tell you what I love about your stories? The fact that it is never based just in the janto relationship. Also having facts, figures and a good strong storyline while ALSO focusing on the relationship. That Is what I love about your stories.

haha Shark attack three! John! That was clever :D brilliant!