Reviews for Checkmate |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Not a cliffhanger! I'll have to find the version then...nooooooo |
![]() ![]() ![]() Have just finished reading the trilogy, all I can say is WOW. Very good storytelling. |
![]() ![]() This was brilliant. The times wimpy stuff has my head spinning! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I read this when I was out of town a while back and forgot to come back for my review. I should have left short ones as I read because there was so much to comment on and I can't remember all the little things I wanted to say. This was a remarkable story and it was such a pleasure to be able to read it while I was away. I looked forward to it every night. The plot was fascinating, your OC and his motivations wonderfully done. The chess references were brilliant, and the end was jaw-droppingly amazing and creepy. I really liked the Jack/Ianto relationship, as usual in your stories. You write a strong Ianto and a devoted Jack and I love that. And the smut. ;) I have to admit that there are sometimes some Jack/Gwen moments (either this one or the last, I can't remember) that sort of make me squirm, but that's realistic, isn't it? Sweeping the Jack/Gwen stuff under the rug probably isn't. This was a wonderful set of stories, fantastic job. You're a great writer and I'm looking forward to reading the other stories that follow Fragmented! Thanks for sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow loved the ending , loved the whole thing :D Thank you its an awsome series :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like how you tie in Flat Holm. But I don't like that Patrick is capable of knowing who they are. Old age won't keep him from trying to kill them. And he will terrorize Ianto f for life. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay tears with that last part. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay it's been a while but you made me cry again with this one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() And she was an alien! Hence her arm! |
![]() ![]() ![]() By the way, you didn't mention it this time, but Gwen isn't second-in-command. If you listen to Owen on the one with the real Captain Jack, he tells Ianto he is s-i-c. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Preferably dead! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So he went to Flat Holm? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really enjoying all of your stories so far, had a good chuckle about the Shark Attack 3 mention, hahahaha |
![]() ![]() ![]() So brilliant That was amazing. The story-line was exceeding well-developed. You had me hooked from the beginning and I couldn't stop until I finished (which took me all of 3 hours mind you). Everyone was in character and it was great! The only comment that I have is the rating. There are some chapters where it might seem to be too graphic for a T rating, so you might want to consider changing that to M. But it's not a really big deal. Great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Shall I tell you what I love about your stories? The fact that it is never based just in the janto relationship. Also having facts, figures and a good strong storyline while ALSO focusing on the relationship. That Is what I love about your stories. |