So brilliant That was amazing. The story-line was exceeding well-developed. You had me hooked from the beginning and I couldn't stop until I finished (which took me all of 3 hours mind you). Everyone was in character and it was great!

The only comment that I have is the rating. There are some chapters where it might seem to be too graphic for a T rating, so you might want to consider changing that to M. But it's not a really big deal.

Great job!

Shall I tell you what I love about your stories? The fact that it is never based just in the janto relationship. Also having facts, figures and a good strong storyline while ALSO focusing on the relationship. That Is what I love about your stories.

haha Shark attack three! John! That was clever :D brilliant!

I'm dead - that ending killed me. Story wise I think Queen is my favorite of the three, but this one is such a rocket ride of emotions and edge of the seatness that it comes very close. Massive job of writing, and one I can see myself rereading more than once. :)

Ah Jack, sometimes it is a wonderful thing to be a walking Kama Sutra lol

I love Tosh - have I mentioned I love Tosh?

It's 7:14 am, I have yet to go to bed and there is no way I am stopping here

I am so glad all of this is up because I would have nibbled my nails away by now...

Very erotic - which is much harder to write than plain smut :)

I agree with Jack, none of this is Ianto's fault. However, knowing Jack, can he keep from making Ianto feel it was by tossing off some stupid comment like he tends to do?

Yes, I shrieked. I had several thoughts on this chapter but they have now gone completely out of my head.

Owen, for all that he is a twat of the highest order, does care. And Gwen's relationship with Ianto is complicated because she's obsessed with Jack and won't let go of it. If I was Ianto I'd have told her off a long time ago. Or punched her. And Jack better keep his rage pointed in the right direction no matter what Ianto tells him.

Tosh is brilliant, but then again we knew that. Ianto is so sad - and you just know it's going to take the devil's own job for Jack to convince him he's not to blame.

That sound you just heard was me screaming curse words in several languages. First off, I'm dying to know what Ianto has remembered, second of all I am going to blame his thoughts of possible execution on being drugged, and third of all if Jack acts like a inconsiderate, unthinking wanker I hope Owen knocks the hell out of him. Or Tosh does. Couldnt be Gwen because I'm too sure she would use the opportunity to cop a feel.

I'm thinking that I'm always going to be playing catch up to your writing because the cliffhangers would drive me insane