|Reviews for Sorry|
| Bleached Kitty chapter 1 . 2/24/2012
Enjoyed the emotion conveyed in the writing.
Could benefit from one last quick proof-read, just to correct simple typos.
Text was a bit choppy and could have flowed a little better.
Not bad for an early piece.
Really enjoyed that simple moment when Sasuke brushed Naruto's hair aside in the first paragraph, was a simple gesture to show coming to terms with what occurred before you started writing in medias res.