Reviews for Sorry
Bleached Kitty chapter 1 . 2/24/2012
Not bad.

Enjoyed the emotion conveyed in the writing.

Could benefit from one last quick proof-read, just to correct simple typos.

Text was a bit choppy and could have flowed a little better.

Not bad for an early piece.

Really enjoyed that simple moment when Sasuke brushed Naruto's hair aside in the first paragraph, was a simple gesture to show coming to terms with what occurred before you started writing in medias res.

keep writing,

B. Kitty