|Reviews for A Dark Harry Childhood|
| Slightly Disturbed Cookie Girl chapter 3 . 2/26
Please continue! Btw I'm dark, very dark, and I like reading bad things like abuse, rape, that sort of thing. I don't do it tho it's just that it changes the profile of the characters which you know so well.
| TheScarlettShadows chapter 1 . 10/29/2012
Hello again. For this story, I think most of the same things apply. Sentences are very weak. If you have free time, do you think you could elaborate on one of the stories, rather than writing so many at the same time, I do belive this is lowering the quality of all of the pieces.
| Cassandra30 chapter 2 . 10/3/2010
Ack! Actually rearranging some of that would change the times a bit.
| Cassandra30 chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
| slythani chapter 3 . 2/24/2008
this is really good! My only suggestion is to not center all of the lines, cause that makes it hard to read. Update soon!
| Geaarg chapter 1 . 8/5/2007
Your style of writing is too calm to be about abuse. I think you should write more connected sentences, more like how you would think.
| Fox Loves Shinigami chapter 3 . 7/24/2007
good fic update soon Ja.
| Angel Kellar chapter 3 . 6/1/2007
Sad, but good. Please update ASAP!
| petersadouchebag14 chapter 3 . 12/27/2005
oh no! please please udpate soon!
| cooroo chapter 3 . 7/20/2005
TOO SHORT! *Pounts* but brilliant. I love Harry torture/abuse. brilliant. UPDATE SOON
| Tasha chapter 3 . 9/4/2004
PLEASE CONTINUE! NOW! HURRY UP!
:) sorry if that was a little to zealous :)
I like you storry a lot so far.
| Star Girl11 chapter 3 . 8/18/2004
You must continue! And get the teachers in here! PLEASE! PRETTY PLEASE
| Tan0508 chapter 3 . 7/31/2004
you have spelled live instead of leave. But other wise it was interesting.
| HecateDeMort chapter 3 . 6/6/2004
this is great, please write loads more
| The Dark Lady 66 chapter 1 . 4/26/2004
This story is all right but there are too many short sentences in it. Try making some of them longer and it will be easier to read.