Reviews for His Wooden Heart
seareader chapter 1 . 3/24/2014
I would love to read more of these!
Just Inevitable chapter 1 . 8/18/2013
Aw, I've never seen this before. It's lovely! Very, very lovely. I like the drabble concept. :)
Tammy333 chapter 1 . 7/12/2013
This was great ! Thanks!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/19/2013
This is how he is; thanks so much for that :)
Margaret chapter 1 . 3/5/2013
Loved it! So sweet.
Maple Fay chapter 1 . 2/26/2012
I love the backstory you've given Charles, and the execution of it: drabbles are tricky little things, but you, my lady, have proven yourself to be a true drabble-whisperer. My sincere congratulations. Thank you for posting this wonderful story.
Batwings79 chapter 1 . 2/25/2012
I am so impressed! Not only with the backstory that you've given Charles, which makes perfect sense by the way...but I have yet to be able to write a 'true drabble' and here you have written 32 of them! I bow down before the goddess! Yes, that's a little 'cheeky' but I am really impressed that you were able to put together 32 perfect 100 word drabbles and still keep the threads of Charles' backstory coherent and believable! Well Done..BRAVA! :D
ellie987 chapter 1 . 2/25/2012
This is absolutely beautiful! I'm really glad someone's written a backstory for Charles because there really aren't a lot out there and this was really great. I really like your take on his family and how he went from serving to the stage and back. You've managed to convey a lot through snippets and that's something quite challenging. Each of them says a lot about Charles, adds a piece to the puzzle that he is or maybe it's just another little piece of his broken heart.

I love how that event from his young life has influenced everything else after that, explaining why Charles is the person we know now. But mostly I adore the way Elsie slowly became a very important person in his life. Just being there for him when he needed someone like after his mother death's and slowly worming her way through his heart, letting him find it wasn't a cold heart at all. Perfect ending. A fantastic image, so sweet and so significant.
lucysmom chapter 1 . 2/25/2012
wow!...you captured that great...definately, pulled together the unwritten early years...can't wait to see more!
mellastar chapter 1 . 2/24/2012
I hit send on my phone!

Proper review: Again, it was perfect in every part. Seeing how he had changed his life twice to run away from his feelings and how he could not flee from them. It was a very touching back story and perfectly in character for Charles. Especially in the end when he finally lets his heart rule and decides that for once in his life change is something good.

Love it
onmyside chapter 1 . 2/24/2012
This was so perfect! Every bit of it touched my heart. I'm glad you decided to put all the bits and pieces
xaddict7 chapter 1 . 2/24/2012
This is so beautiful and perfect. I love it so much!
the maids diaries chapter 1 . 2/24/2012
"Which from that moment on is no longer his. But beats only for her." - You killed me, broke my heart in millions of little pieces and them melted all of them! This was so beautiful, sweet, pretty, wonderful...

It was a wonderful reading to end the day, thank you very much.
18tilIdie chapter 1 . 2/24/2012
Its beautiful, fluid, sensitive, these are his toughts and experiences! Please add some more positive ones openly able to love her.
tartan robes chapter 1 . 2/24/2012
Ugh, this was just incredibly pretty. There were some really cutting lines and, overall, this is definitely a plausible narrative that suits Carson perfectly. I really, really enjoyed this.
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