Reviews for Loyalities
insolitasum chapter 1 . 10/12
I simply love those two. Their friendship and their bond is so special and you captured that. Again.
You're writing this in a way where I can see it so clearly in front of my inner eye, it's amazing.
Miss Light Bright chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
Love it. Beautiful.
Books-Are-Life5 chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
Adorable, and really portrays their relationship. Not to mention they both seemed in character and the writing was rather professional and organized. Well done.
TypewriterTardis chapter 1 . 5/15/2012
Touching, sweet, sad but happy at the same time, if that makes sense... I thought you caught Will's and Jem's characters very well.
PurpleRose328 chapter 1 . 4/16/2012
Aww! :) I love it!
ForeverCountingStars chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
Beautifully written! Just amazing :)
jpendragon chapter 1 . 2/25/2012
This is so beautiful! Beautifully written, I love the part describing Jem's dancing eyelids, and a beautiful story. It was definetly one of the best Jem and Will brotherhood stories because it got the feeling across without going overboard.