Reviews for The Seven Sins (DISCONTINUED)
Raven Angel Of Darkness chapter 7 . 11/30/2012
cant wait for ur next ch the story is good.
Zaan299 chapter 7 . 9/13/2012
Heh, bad f**king luck indeed! But Jinx hopefully won't hold this against Raven. I just wish she could've kicked one of the Sins asses. I REALLY hope she can restrain herself like she promised Robin...

By the way, if they pull a heist say once a month, shouldn't they live like kings or something? Even if they managed to only get away with a small amount they should at least pony up enough cash for say 20 grand...

Even taking into account how much Mammoth eats it would be enough to sustain them for what, half a year to a year? So why does Giz think they should pull a heist? Are they enjoying the crime or just trying to get by? Makes you wonder...

The whole Trigon can break a rib while your meditating is a bit disconcerting, but Raven can deal with it, i hope! Will she and Jinx make up? And Jinx actually had a PLAN for this? I thought she just faked that for her teammates! She should be smart enough to know not to cross the empath... If this plays out well she could be on the side of the angels. If not, then the funeral should be set on a Sunday... Nobody has anything else to do on Sundays...
Zaan299 chapter 5 . 9/13/2012
The story is REALLY good so far. How do you manage to captivate people within the first three chapter? You good woman have a gift. If I met envy he would shift into one of your works, their so good that I'm jealous of them! But I love 'em anyway! What do you call something that you like so much, but also envy? It's a threesome with- I mean it's a conundrum... yeah. Ignore that last part...

Great, great, great, GREAT story so far! I'll probably finish the rest of this today, but for the love of all that sacred and evil (like the Sins) don't stop!
Zaan299 chapter 4 . 9/13/2012
Let's see here... Gluttony and Sloth? Or Lust and Sloth? I'm pretty sure sloth is the one with the long hair... I'm a little in shock at the moment, because I never suspected that Jinx would try so hard to make things easier for Raven so soon... I just hope she isn't blamed for the store being trashed. It was her fault, but it was only in self defense!
Zaan299 chapter 3 . 9/13/2012
THAT was a negative reaction if there ever was one... I wonder what Blood asked her for in return for the info? I know she didn't Do it, but nonetheless I'm curious... How far does the Blood family blood line go? What is he, Sebastian Blood XXV? And who would sleep with the guy or his father? How would they find time from their blood rituals to procreate? It's just disgusting to think that women would willingly offer themselves to men from the blood family...
Zaan299 chapter 2 . 9/13/2012
I KNEW it... who was it? Wrath? Envy? Sloth? And she was having such a good day too... at least she had a moment alone with Jinx without worrying about her being caught by the others...
Zaan299 chapter 1 . 9/13/2012
Oh god. No. NO! This is just too good of a setup! Raven is having such a great day, but someones gonna ruin it. Why can't she just have one day; ONE f**king day. A day where she can just relax. This is a great chapter, but I can sense that the party won't end well.
Korraganitar the NightShadow chapter 7 . 9/7/2012
This fic is moving along nicely. I actually find it funny that you made brothers for Raven, considering i've been pouring effort into making a cousin for her (a son of Grazz't as it were). can't wait for more!
TheUtsukushiiYume chapter 7 . 8/5/2012
Oh please update soon!11
discb chapter 7 . 7/29/2012
You thinking of doing an update on this soon? Just wondering if I can get a mild heads up as I'd like to retread this(again) before the next chapter.
Gnarled Bone chapter 7 . 5/11/2012
Hope you update soon. )
DragoLord19D chapter 7 . 5/7/2012
(gets down on knees) please UPDATE THIS STORY!
I'm a Lover not a Hater chapter 7 . 4/19/2012
Anyone has better luck than Jinx, got to agree with that. :D
Edgar H. Sutter chapter 7 . 4/3/2012
this is pretty awesome so far, I really like how you've done the other stories too, and the complex romance between Jinx and Raven? pure genius! (I'd have still preferred Rae to be with Beast Boy, but then, I'm not the one writing the story, am I?) but this is probably the best so far, because of her brothers being involved, and I guess I have a lot against those Douches! (pardon the language there) seven deadly sins, It's almost like the creators of those guys wanted to bring the old christian Ideals (or simply some changed, jazzed-up, demonic version of the Movie "Seven") into a more contemporary thing for the comics, actually, I haven't even read the comics where they're involved yet. I must say, I do like the idea of them fighting beings like that, if not the actual fighting itself, and by the way, Jared's name has an "e" in it, you had an "a", and also, I hope we'll get to see Jacob's power demonstrated soon, maybe it might seem Pervy to want that, being that he's a demon of Lust, but he should still get a chance to show what he can do, maybe to Rae and Jinx, or to Robin and Starfire. You remember the others and what their sins are right? (it's kinda hard to forget them in a lot of ways) there's the rich, businessman type, who represents Greed, who's name I believe is James, then there's the lazy, almost stoner-like brother who represents Sloth, and his name is Jack, and then there's the fat one who probably eats a hell of a lot (no pun intended) and who actually has no name, but I always thought, in the spirit of the other "J" names, he should be named Justin, if you disagree and have another name in mind, I'd be happy to hear it, I just think it should go along with the other names, and start with a "J". I really enjoy this story, and I hope you update it soon, this has my interest piqued, Happy Writing!
Angelic Toaster chapter 7 . 3/31/2012
I can't wait to see more of this :D
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