Reviews for Once Upon an Emmett
Alphayaki chapter 7 . 7/3
im sorry I tried reading this but it's WAYYY too much like Twilight. I'm not trying to be a flamer, but heres some constructive criticism: First, I think things are going way to fast. You mention at the beginning that Emmett is avoiding girls due to the death of Rosalie, then what's he doing with Elizabeth? Apart from a small conversation in class the only thing he has to be attracted to is her appearance. The other major flaw, I think this is too close to the original Twilight books. It's almost as though everything that happened to Bella is happening to Elizabeth, wish you were more original :(
Guest chapter 5 . 5/28
Ummmmm...she shook his hand and said nothing but their fingers brush and she gasps at the coldness?
gleefan2009 chapter 20 . 1/16
Love it please write more
Guest chapter 3 . 1/13
If I wanted to read twilight I'd pick up the book. I was hoping for an original story line but find myself disappointed.
Guest chapter 11 . 9/13/2015
WHAT THE FUCK I THOUGHT HE WAS DEAD!
Mashkai30 chapter 19 . 3/4/2014
I have enjoyed this very much. I hope you find time to finish it someday as I would love to read the ending:)
Guest chapter 19 . 1/10/2014
I LOVE IT, KEEP WRITING PLZ
Child of Music and Dreams chapter 4 . 12/7/2013
(frowns in confusion)
I thought that Bella's last name was Swan!
Or has Edward married her already?
RealLifeGemini chapter 20 . 9/22/2013
And I'm off to read the squeal!
RealLifeGemini chapter 3 . 9/22/2013
I really really like this story so far.
delete-account-please 4171342 chapter 20 . 9/7/2013
Great story really-really liked it.. off to read your squeal.
Kingdom Hearts Slayer chapter 20 . 1/24/2013
Nice keep going its good
XxBlindXxAngelXx chapter 7 . 1/20/2013
this still sounds way to much like twilight
XxBlindXxAngelXx chapter 3 . 1/20/2013
this sounds a lot like twilight so far?
Child of Music and Dreams chapter 20 . 12/30/2012
I LOVE THIS STORY!
And poor Rose!

Katie
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