|Reviews for Why is Mama Moaning?|
| Anon chapter 1 . 11/13/2013
I want more of this! 3
| Mrs. Miracle chapter 1 . 10/24/2013
:D loved it, more?
| ThatGuyOverThere chapter 1 . 10/24/2013
Omg, lol, poor Finland. XD MOAR.
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/30/2013
i love how Finland was the one ending up traumatized
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/17/2013
| Tina Vainamoinen chapter 1 . 7/19/2013
Of course, Sealand would be able to figure out parental controls when it comes to something as serious as anime.
I love how calm and blunt Sweden was! And how panicky and flustered Finland was! Hilarious.
| C.J Todd chapter 1 . 7/17/2013
'Damn, that would have been another way to get around the awkwardness of the sex talk; have the internet do it for them. It wouldn't be entirely unbiased though, considering some of the perverse things that were on the internet, but it would have been less awkward. '... My Mom never gave me the talk she gave me the internet and sent me to public school.
| FrankinMaxxx chapter 1 . 7/6/2013
THIS IS SO PERFECT! going to sex in the kitchen oh my god XD
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/7/2012
well, that was... interesting... then again sealand's human age IS 12 so he does deserve to know about sex
| Mischa chapter 1 . 5/19/2012
I heard you were one of those people who do that annoying editing thing to people so I decided, hey, why not do the same to you.
"And there was a strange sound coming from down the hall." The word and should never be at the start of a sentence. Ever.
"And less – restrained, somehow." Same reason as before.
"It wasn't like Sealand didn't know Sweden and Finland were together; it was obvious, what with Sweden calling Finland his wife, a name Finland still objected to, all the lingering touches, sitting close together and even living together." 'What with..' doesn't fit in there. It makes no sense if you reread it. Not to mention, a complete run-on sentence. (You seem to have a lot of those in here).
" Most of the time" It's not even a complete sentence! Where is your subject and verb?
"Then again, Greece was the most sexually active nation, but he wasn't doing too well at the moment, either." There shouldn't be a comma between 'moment' and 'either'.
" Probably" is not a sentence!
| Yaoi-lover413 chapter 1 . 4/22/2012
Awesome! xD I'm so gonna use this ;)
| death2society chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
One word: more! I would love to see more SuFin and how they get on with Sealand as their "son". Haha, but do focus on the main fic first. TGTYL is too awesome to abandon. Anyway thanks for the good read.
| auroramcchickenatmcdonalds chapter 1 . 3/14/2012
Oh God, this is hilarious. Sealand is so cute!
| MidnightSakuraBlossom and SYD chapter 1 . 3/12/2012
EPIC WIN. I believe this sums up my thoughts about the story nicely. ;D
Although it was a bit awkward to read this with my best friend walking in and looking over my shoulder at the part involving Sealand talking about the internet porn. I kind of...I gave her a bit of an awkward explanation for what I was reading. She promptly looked concerned and then fled the room.
She obviously does not support SuFin like I do. *Runs off with some of my un-published SuFin fanfiction to try and convert her*
| BlazestarOfShadowClan chapter 1 . 2/27/2012
i want more of this!