Reviews for A New Start on Life
TheFlowerOfTheCourt chapter 1 . 3/8
Ill tell you what I think... I think you need to unabandon this story...like right now!
FireflyOfTheShadowWolves chapter 2 . 2/16
Are you still writing this story? I really like it and your other story Blind Love Blind Faith.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/20
Harry is to tall man and since his pairing is Alice she's way to short at their current heights they would look like a big brother with his cute middle school sister you should make harry around 6'2" and Alice around 5'4" still a height difference but at least this one is reasonable
Guest chapter 1 . 1/20
Your jasper is to tall and your Alice to short jasper is only a few inches taller then Alice and your Alice is like 5 inches to short rose and Emmet are close enough though I think you might be off by an inch or 2 on them but they are close enough that it doesn't matter
Guest chapter 1 . 1/20
Good story but its kind of stupid to make harry 6'7" when Alice is like 5'4"ish and even if he wasn't with Alice making him that tall is still stupid at that tall he'd make Emmet the "bear" look like a midget and I think harry/alice/tonks should be the pairing but thats just my opinion its still a good story despite harry being so tall so I just imagine him being shorter
Jade chapter 8 . 11/4/2013
I really hate it when authors do this.
By far, this story is one of the few that have enthralled me.
And it frustrates me to no end that I cannot read the end.
I'm sure you have felt the same way once about a story.
Kittens Kat chapter 8 . 7/11/2013
GOOD LUCK WITH ALL YOUR IDEAS AS I AM SURE THEY ARE ALL GOOD AND INTERESTING! THANK YOU!
Safiiri chapter 8 . 6/9/2013
Plz post a notice when you pick a site, I'd like to continue reading your work :)
Jamesk19 chapter 2 . 5/10/2013
great chapter
Jamesk19 chapter 1 . 5/10/2013
great 1st chapter
RogueNya chapter 8 . 4/23/2013
Well this is interesting story, hope to read more in the future.
jenn008 chapter 8 . 4/23/2013
Can you tell me the new site so I can find the rewritten version of the story? thanks!
aldadien chapter 8 . 4/23/2013
I really like your story but 3 author's notices out of 8 chapters... I'll probably ditch this from my favorites. Good luck with your stories
beauty0102 chapter 8 . 4/23/2013
I thought it was a new chapter "sighs disponent" well hope you move soon.
maesde chapter 7 . 4/7/2013
Found it, liked it, following :D. A new twist, besides I like the Harry/Alice pairing so :P.
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