|Reviews for Aftermath of saving Venice from sinking|
| gjftuygiy chapter 3 . 5/7/2013
please write more
| hfdukfy chapter 2 . 5/6/2013
don't say do not all the time just advise
| sara chapter 3 . 5/5/2013
you going to finish ...
| anonimis chapter 2 . 5/5/2013
wow a little detailed but good none the less
| gerryade.merrygold chapter 3 . 4/14/2013
| Kirsten chapter 2 . 9/10/2012
| Lauren chapter 1 . 9/10/2012
Cool story bro.
| Mrs. Pepper Stark chapter 3 . 8/3/2012
Hahaha, I can't wait to see Johnny's expression lol! I think it's a horrible idea. Chris Evans plays Johnny right? Well whoever does they did a perfect job and I don't want to see a good movie ruined.
Eg, The Hulk, Amazing Spiderman, and so on...
| Guest chapter 3 . 8/2/2012
Wow, nice chapter! This story is looking good so far, but I think you should consider capitalizing their names. I noticed that you forgot to capitalize the characters' names in the first couple paragraphs. There are also a few run on sentences but they don't really affect the story. ;) Can't wait to read more. I'm lovin' this story so far! And about the reboot, I think that they should just make a third movie instead of rebooting it. To be honest, I actually LOVED the first two films besides everyone else saying it was horrible. And plus, Reed was so hot in those films. Woah, this review is so long. Sorry 'bout that. Anyways, hope you'll update soon. I'll definetly be waiting for more.
| DeeCatVenice chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
I like the story but is the title anything to do with it? LOL. I'm brand new to Fanction and am reviewing stories to help the fanfic community. FYI, my story FIFTY SHADOWS OF VENICE, is coming along, please check it out and review? I am reading all stories with a Venice theme.
| Mrs. Pepper Stark chapter 2 . 7/23/2012
Though just saying only thing you could improve on is any numbers up to 100, you write in words, eg "I know a way that we can make these 2 weeks memorable…" "I know a way that we can make these two weeks memorable..."
But I enjoyed this chapter and hope you update soon :)
Ps. Last sentence was really funny and left a mental image in my mind...
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/23/2012
OMG! that was amazing! Reed and Sue are soo cute together!
| Mrs. Pepper Stark chapter 1 . 2/25/2012
I was a bit confused at first, But I like it so far :)
so.. Are you going to make it a two-shot?