Reviews for Rise of the Phoenix Lord
Guest chapter 15 . 1/5/2016
Criticism- you spend too much time setting every thing up, the chamber of secrets could've been 1 chapter, reviewing memories could've been 2 or three, and the time in the gringots chamber could've been 1/2 maybe one. Other than that, you're good.

Personal complaint-Sooooooooo, now what? Just gonna leave it hanging? It's been 4 years, come back and finish it or give it up for adoption, don't be one of those writers who start a story, get guilted into coming back, write a single chapter, and never touch it again
Currahee506 chapter 15 . 6/21/2015
Update please
firebolthallow1572 chapter 15 . 12/9/2014
This story need to be finish please
AlexanderTheNightKing chapter 15 . 6/30/2014
nice one pall liked it alot
Guest chapter 15 . 10/26/2013
good book can you finish it
Pheonixs1518 chapter 15 . 7/17/2013
hope you start updating again
Ranmaleopard chapter 15 . 5/10/2013
this is just too damn good! i cant wait to see what happens next please continue!
kelwin chapter 2 . 3/30/2013
good fic
HoosierCullen chapter 15 . 3/3/2013
Very cool fic and I like the way you are not conforming to the general idea of Harry's lineage and have gone your own way. The way Salazar is I like and think is very good for the story. The Weasley's that betrayed Harry are not unexpected and I am not nor will I be in the future a Ron/Hermione shipper. I love HONKS fics and this is a good one. I also like the idea of Dudley being a semi-wizard and possibly being a love interest of Luna. Again Very good fic keep it up.
Gracealma chapter 15 . 12/14/2012
Wow! Excellent story. I'm looking forward to reading more (please with a cherry on top!)
Jonn Wolfe chapter 15 . 12/8/2012
This is a fun ride, and I hope to be reading more of it soon!
jinjoe chapter 7 . 10/22/2012
this is a boring story
Mattmaster112 chapter 2 . 10/1/2012
what? is dumbledore happy that serius is dead, or is harry just grieving and misconstruing every thing? it doesn't make sense that dumbledore, being as smart as he is, would make a stupid mistake like that
michaelc100 chapter 15 . 9/25/2012
Loved the update

i cant wait for more.

i do hope that harry finds out what ragnog said he hopes that harry doesnt & that it doesnt affect harrys relationship with gringotts
Guest chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
i just read this prologue and i can say with certainty i will not be reading this nothing against you i just dislike the idea of prophecy and wanted to say that i hope your story goes well
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