|Reviews for The Brown of Dittany|
| S0emme0S chapter 1 . 3/24/2012
Oh my god!
It's could be a great start for a long fiction! Why you don't do that?
Well, I'm actually in love whith the pairing LilyLuna/Severus (Yes, I'm a little crazy, I suppose...) but I'm resercing fic with this pairing in english ad I don't found pratically anything.
Only in Italy there are many writers that love like me this couple. So... What I'm saying? XD
However, I like so much your fic, and in my opinion the caracter of Lily is very good. You could think about the idea of a long fic, you now?
Ok, I now that my english is bad and I'm sorry, but I'm italian! XD
In Italy we call this pair "Repayment". I think it's perfect, don't you?
Ok, byebye, and write another fic, 'cause I like your stile!
| Arabella Lee Smith chapter 1 . 2/25/2012
Duj has given you some great ideas! I want to add that to continue this, you need to decide (you may have already done so, I know) whether he will make himself known shortly after being saved, thus preserving the girls' timeline. Or will he hide for 28 years? perhaps in Italy, the potions master who made the poison-destroying potion that saved him?)
| duj chapter 1 . 2/25/2012
If I were you, I'd focus developments on "what was so wrong in the future that saving him, would fix." Why are they saving him? So many people have died, before and since; why would anyone single out Snape for rescue, especially someone/s who'd never even met him? Also, why specifically those two? What's the special connection between Snape and them?
There are many possibilities. For instance, they've been crushing on his portrait, they're lifting the life debt their families owed him (and failed to pay when they watched him die), they need his expertise in Dark magic or Potions, Hogwarts has fallen into ruin and only a real past headmaster/mistress can save it (and he's the only one they can pluck out of the past without destroying the timeline), they're taking a school assignment a bit too far...