Reviews for UnVeiled
LunaBeth203 chapter 6 . 3/3/2012
Aw I love Snape in this but I have always thought that he and Lily couldn't be anymore than friends awesome chapter
LuffyMarra chapter 6 . 3/3/2012
Great chapter. I really like it. Poor Severus. Keep going please.
Hufflepuff's Prince chapter 6 . 3/3/2012
Very nice the way the boys were sorted out. I am truly enjoying this fic!
Angel N Darkness chapter 6 . 3/3/2012
*glares at sirius* sirius you are an arse... you did a great job on this chapter... love it... update soon... im glad that severus is letting harry comfort him...
StormyFireDragon chapter 6 . 3/3/2012
this is amazing. you have a talent with these characters. I just hope that Jo can see this and appreciate the talent that you give using her characters. Thanks for being special.
SakuraDragomir chapter 6 . 3/3/2012
hey waz up

can u write more of this story plz? if u can

i love harry potter and the gang

i hope i can read more of ur stories


-yuuki kuran

queen of the night

i wish i can be in this story

itz a great stor great writer

i can't wait to read more of this story soon

plz update soon
YeCatsJ chapter 6 . 3/3/2012
Great chapter. Sirius really really needs a spanking. I hope that's what Remus has planned. Can't wait for lily to turn up.
DarkRavie chapter 6 . 3/3/2012
Another very good chapter. I look forwward to reading what happens next in your fic.
Celebwen Telcontar chapter 6 . 3/3/2012
Sirius deserves a few smacks with a ruler for that. And poor Severus... will Lily choose Sev this time around, or Jamie?

foxee-chik chapter 6 . 3/3/2012
wow! keep goin! i like it! i cant w8 2 read the nxt chap!
DeansBabyGirl92 chapter 6 . 3/3/2012
loved it lots! this story just keeps getting better!
cara-tanaka chapter 6 . 3/3/2012
Can't wait for more
acelly chapter 6 . 3/3/2012
Poor little Severus, Sirius so has it in for him! I'm glad Alby is enjoying being a brother and that Rosie is sticking up for him.

I'm really enjoying this story and looking forward to the next chapter. :-)
Leviathan of the Sea chapter 6 . 3/3/2012
Poor Severus! He's a grown man trapped in a kid's body. And Sirius never learns!
HarrySevfan chapter 5 . 3/3/2012
Love it! Please update again, I need to know what happens at the Burrow!
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