|Reviews for UnVeiled|
| Guest chapter 12 . 10/8/2013
I've just read this, and I cried. the scene at the preschool is similar to what had happened in Syria. as of today many babies, and children are killed, poisoned, and decapitated. but no other country have done anything to save them. tell me then, is "voldemort and his Death Eater" truly live amongst us?
| karen1025 chapter 61 . 9/30/2013
hope the sequel comes soon!
Amazing story, I really appreciated that Sev realized Lily was not without fault.
| moonlight10060 chapter 2 . 9/27/2013
Lily's coming in Halloween?
| Guest chapter 61 . 9/20/2013
Great book can't wait for book 2
| slytheringeekfreak2017 chapter 34 . 9/14/2013
"Turn to page 394"
| Guest chapter 61 . 9/10/2013
Are you going to make the part 2. I absolutly loved this one and have been waiting for part 2 for what seems like forever!
| hervissa chapter 7 . 8/29/2013
I really like the relationship between Sevvie and Harry. And to be honest, it was only thanks to this fic [woah, I've first read it, like, half of year ago?] that I started liking Harry more... :D
Sirius got his first spanking. MWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHH.
It's just...he deserved it many times, and finally, he got it xD
And Molly cooks like a devil himself - tons of fantastic food...Severus must be amazed :))
| hervissa chapter 6 . 8/29/2013
I like the image of old [well, not OLD, but you know.. ;]] Lucius and Narcissa...still caring about each other :3
And to be honest, it's quite hilarious to imagine a five-years-old boy talking like a middle-aged teacher.. ;D
And Sirius is a jerk. No matter how many good things he did, there is always that side of him that will always be a bully.
He can't help that, I guess.
And I'm glad Sevvie has Mimic. He needed something like that. For quite some time...
Excellent chapter! :))
P.S. Love the 'feral' side of Remus :D
| hervissa chapter 5 . 8/28/2013
No matter how many mistakes he did, no matter how mean he was, the fact that he was alone stays.
But with Harry knowing him, /really/ knowing him, it's gonna be much better :3
AND DAMMIT LITTLE SEVVIE IS JUST TOO ADORABLE :3
| hervissa chapter 4 . 8/28/2013
The beginning of this story, the first ten or so chapters, are probably my favourite.
And I read them whenever I'm feeling a bit down.. :))
| Hiccup Dragon Trainer chapter 36 . 8/19/2013
Thumbprint Jam Biscuits? Are you referring to Jammie Dodgers?
| mysinger chapter 61 . 8/19/2013
You have written so many amazing stories that I have enjoyed reading. Of all of them I think this is my favourite, possibly because I too thought Severus deserved a much better ending than he was given in DH. The concept for "Unveiled" is truly unique and masterfully carried out. Your characters have depth, growing and changing throughout the story. I especially enjoyed Severus' relationships with Harry, Alby and Lily. I look forward to the sequel. Thank you.
| Kristy chapter 34 . 8/17/2013
Page 394 was the big part of the third harry potter movie. It started the hints about their current professor of the defense against the dark arts Remus Lupin. And why he always disappeared once a month for lessons.
| TheMajorsMate chapter 18 . 8/12/2013
Hi, this is the 2nd time i'm reading your story, which i love, just noticed something though, at the end of last chapter, in hagrids hut, sev tells harry to send a patronus and he does, so why is gin so mad? Didnt she receive it or was it not informative enough?
| ShardsandAshes chapter 61 . 8/10/2013
This was an incredible story. I felt a little sad about Sev and Lily, but I guess it would be more realistic to do it that way. They are just children after all. I would love to read a sequel!