Reviews for The Tale of Alfeo
donkeytransformer123 chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
I think you should make another chapter!
Melancholic Zero chapter 1 . 2/25/2012
Although short, I find this to be quite an interesting tale. However, although it is clever, I don't consider it enough to be a fan fiction.

It does not seem to have much time put into it, and the final product is rather dull and unremarkable. It is just another tale, to be forgotten in less than a day.

Perhaps if it spent more time describing the island, the life there, this story might merge with the canon fiction, but alas, it does not.

If you don't mind all of this, that is fine. All I am saying is this is average, you didn't make it bad, but you did not make it good either.

~0IV