Reviews for No worries
Xploited chapter 4 . 9/28/2012
I like your take on this, and equally I like the way you perceive the characters. However, I think you should maybe try sticking to only two point of views. Like perhaps Freddie and Effy's, instead of switching so suddenly. It adds more depth to the story if you portray the other character's emotions through the two main's point of view instead of taking on first person narrative for each. Keep it up though and keep writing because I'm ready to read it :)