I love your story, please continued

I KNEW THAT WAS ALLEN WALKER! THE MOMENT YOU SAID WHITEFACED CLOWN AND ALLEN IN ONE STORY, I WAS LIKE... (alarm bells in my head—by the way... the manga is still taking long—)

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AWESOME STORY!

update pleaseeeeee... good story u have

update pleaseeeeee... good story u have

hello..

love your story so much..
it's so deep, unique, and fresh...

it's different than other story which have similarity idea...

hope you will get the best inspiration to finish the story...

I will wait the next chapter.. hope you update soon.

thx u

I know this is the first real action we're seeing out of Tsuna but aren't we making too big a deal out of it? Two idiot assassins and suddenly an entire room of dangerous people start crawling through the air ducks like there's an army after them. The professionalism is refreshing as he is acting like a Boss, it's just that they've been so completely on the defensive right from the start it makes you think they're still amateur pushovers. I expected him to be in control of the situation when the assassins came knocking.

I hope that "find yourself" sentiment doesn't mean this Tsuna only got smarter instead of stronger. I haven't seen a single instance that suggested this Tsuna knows how to handle himself in combat and realistically speaking since he learned everything so much earlier than in canon I'll be deeply disappointed if he isn't somewhat stronger than he was in canon.

Should've finished the last chapter before commenting. Gotta say I'm definitely liking the direction the story's headed in.

Yeah, I'm skipping every blush or teary moment of his. I want the bad*ss and mysterious boss you barely introduced before jumping back into the past, not the predictable crybaby we already know and love.

Your plot is great! My biggest problem with stories is usually their language. Your language is mostly ok, but your grammer is off. You mess up tense and plural forms of words and sometimes miss articles in sentences. If you have a chance you should go back and edit for the grammer. Otherwise this is a great story!

I really enjoyed reading your story thus far.
As a pianist myself, the only complaint I have is the music piece you had Gokudera play. In all honesty, from the way you described the piece it should be a difficult piece, however for the piece you've selected, "David Gaines, symphony no 1" does not have much part for the piano to make the allow for one to demonstrate much skill. Symphonies in general tend to focus more on the orchestra as a whole over the piano, so the piano mostly overshadowed and just does simple accompaniment.
Other than that, again I really liked your story thus far, and please dont take offense to my review. Just my sense as a musician flaring from that small portion. Look forward to reading more from you.

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please update author... it's such a great story... please... I really love it...

Sorry posted on wrong chapter through app!

Please update already!