I just can not get enough of this story. Great job on this last chapter and can't wait for more.

Haha, I have no clue why I'm laughing right now, maybe it's the fact that Alduin now has his wish come true of Shadowmere being distracted. Alduin's really is having a hard time with the whole human emotion thing isn't he? He really had no clue what he was feeling when Freyja told him that little tidbit, then to realize that at the current moment they aren't so different must have been unsettling.

Another awesome chapter! Keep 'em coming! Take care! _

Mist shout makes it all nice and wet.

wow, this one was great! I loved the personal conversation. The feelings are starting to emerge nicely, please don't rush it.

Also, I like the idea of mage ink being weather-proof, it's extremely sensible, come to think of it .

However, the end seemed a bit rushed. I had to reread it twice to get what was actually happening, and who was saying what.

And about the werewolf thing - wasn't Krev killed AFTER the offer was accepted?

Keep up the great work.

nice touch with the mist shout, that scene was awesome. hell, the whole story has been awesome. i liked how you threw in Sinding too.

Ahhhh I love your updates ! I check my email everyday and get disappointed when I the update to find out it's not yours.

I really really loved the freyja alduin convetsation scene, where their characters open up and their relationship advances . LOVED alduin's response to "did you regret it " because he realizes himself now that his feelings are conflicted.

love this ! love you ! love freyja x alduin !

Agh, this is definitely more difficult than it ought to be. Hmm. One more try; Distraction - Number - 4 . deviantart . com. Kay, hopefully this'll work since I've added spaces. *crosses fingers*

Oops, looks like the link was cut off. Just go to .com and you'll find it in my gallery.

First, I must commend you for your excellent writing prowess. I have a friend who is a writer and have been spoiled by brilliant dialogue, imagery, and character development. You have all of these within this story and a wonderful plot to go with it!

I adore how you've developed Alduin as well as his and Freyja's interactions.

This story has been particularly inspiring to my artistic side and I've drawn several sketches of how I picture the characters. I would love if you'd look at them; I'm always interested in seeing how close my vision is to the writer's. You can see them here:

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Thank you for gracing us readers with this lovely work and I eagerly look forward to the next chapter!

I swear, I check for an update every ten minutes! This story has me absolutely hooked. Especially love how Freyja and Alduin are continuously trying to convince themselves that they don't find each other attractive.

You are awesome for this. If I could send you brownies, I would. :P

I really can't wait until Alduin finds out that when he's hurt the dragonborn recieves the same injury. Great chapter as always.

Even though Freyja is a woman,I can't help but view her current relationship with Alduin as a

Wonderful work,as always.

You write action so beautifully! Your story is a rare gem that has captured my attention so completely. Keep it up!

Wow. This is one very original idea. I've never quite seen/read anything like this story line before. Just the perfect blend of romance/avdenture/action. Excellent writting! Loved it!