Wow I just loved the fight scene! it was a bit odd to imagine at some parts but I loved it either way and glad that the real dovakiin is mostly alright

Awww, this was a sweet chapter. I really am liking how their relationship is playing out. Good work! '_'b

I just hope he's not sphycotic enough to reserect said dragon till he himself is a dragon, and then kill him all over again or punish him anyway. Now you see that would be interesting to watch.

it's me again! WHAT YOU HAVE ALREADY UPDAT - ok I need to speed up my reading to catch up TT_TT But dude! this chapter was LOVE

Nice chapie!

THIS FIGHT SCENE.

Oh my god. It was awesome.

You do an excellent job portraying the intense action taking place while fighting a dragon. Everything about the combat is wonderfully realistic.

This fic is truly a delicious read, I'm very much looking forward to the next chapter.

Wow, very well done chapter. I was on the edge of my seat through the most of it.

And if I had known you weren't certain about the romance between Freyja and Alduin, I would have thrown in my support sooner.

Poor Leontius. I'm surprised Alduin is so violent! just kidding. You write action flawlessly! I find it's the hardest thing to write but you tackled it so effortlessly I really enjoyed this chapter ;))) (and I am going to try and review every chapter you have updated so far)

I couldn't stop laughing. the first half of this chapter really cracked me up and I was giggling so loudly my dad gave me a weird look cos our computer's in the living room. But it was so cute when Freyja was teaching him to walk xDD and I guess Alduin is finally feeling hu-manly urges, eh? AWESOMENESS.

Aww, I never thought I'd say this, but... poor Alduin, I feel sorry for him... he's like a little baby XDDD And I like how Freyja is taking care of him. I think my favourite line was 'Don't forget the eyelashes' *hint hint* looool

Woooow! This is one amazing story! Your writing skills are awesome and this is a truly unique idea. I just finished the main quest line a few days ago and I was actually feeling as though you don't get much interaction with Alduin although he is meant to be your mortal enemy. But reading this kinda makes me feel a bit more to the game now(if that makes sense TT_TT)

:)! Oh my gosh, you do not suck at writing fight scenes! That was intense. I like how another dragon swooped in and forced Alduin to choose between crushing his enemy or saving her. And yes, a Freyja and Alduin romance will be very appreciated. ;)

This is an amazing plot idea! I love this story, and can't wait to read more.

Oh chapter 8 is up! I died of happiness when I saw this! I really like your writing style too and Alduin's care for Freya. It's very cute